hotel me.....

dusk arising

 

 

 

She took a vacation
away from the humdrum
and her careless partner.
Six weeks at hotel me
free rides to the beach
all bills paid with lies.

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 2nd, 2021 05:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: Some memories are made of this.
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • L. B. Mek

    costly, some expenses
    accumulate on bill's
    that ink deep
    within that self we 'choose'
    to hide from ourselves
    and like all bills: eventually
    karma comes to collect...
    a great write Dusk, sometimes we all feel the need to escape, but like you write
    escaping within lies comes at a hefty cost - sometimes

    • AlitaOpal

      Nothing comes without consequence, but isn\'t life supposed to be lived? I\'d do so in a heart beat.. thank you for your wonderful piece 🌹

    • Jerry Reynolds

      Mighty fine write Dusk.

    • FredPeyer

      I like this one d a, it would be nice if we could take a vacation from ourselves sometimes.

    • Michael Edwards

      A perfect little write dusk.

    • Goldfinch60

      Some memories are always within us.

      Andy

    • SureshG

      OOOUCH!
      Painful memories, truly emotional



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