Michael Edwards

HIDDEN DEEP

 

 

HIDDEN DEEP

 

 

Where only shadows stretch their fingers

hidden deep where no man treads

among the trees an elven form

where maleficent forces hide

in other worldly truckled light.

 

Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    Those maleficent forces shall be shown when the light hits them.

    Good to see you back Michael and glad all is well.

    Doing triptychs now are you? Good work.

    Andy

    • Michael Edwards

      Yes done a few and a couple have sold - thanks Andy.

    • orchidee

      I'm not having them walks in the woods then! Well, not at dusk anyway.
      Good write and trip-wotsit M.

    • dusk arising

      Good to see you again and a great piece which enlivens my mind to venture there...... with my mind's fantasy beings.

    • MendedFences27

      "Truckled light" submissive to one's control. If only we could "truckle light," then instead of "trucking down the highway" we could be "truckling across the universe." Enjoyed that word and all the rest of them. This one is a keeper. - Phil A.

    • Fay Slimm.

      We have both been away for the same while Mike and so nice now I am back on line to see you at your art-work again - - love the scary-worded verse and the inspiringly clever triptychs.

      • Michael Edwards

        Didn't know you'd also gone AWOL but great to see you're well dear Fay - thanks so much for your kind accolades.

      • Jerry Reynolds

        Hi Michael. Fix that leak in the Garage? Great art Good poem.

        • Michael Edwards

          Not as bad as I thought it was but does need repair - will sort it out soon. Thanks Jerry.

        • Dove

          Cool, been doing lots of Art myself!
          Cute poem and great drawings!

          • Michael Edwards

            Gee ta muchly - wen will we c your art here on MPS?

          • L. B. Mek

            a worded bridge between fantasy and reality's 'trucked light's,
            where wrongful deeds come with consequences that resonate way after that last page has been read and a gavel's echo, has been felt..
            so glad to read you're doing well my friend!

            • Michael Edwards

              Yes all is well - thanks so much LB.

            • Mottakeenur Rehman

              🙏🏻❤️❤️🔥



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