Minds Your Into.

Words form in my mind

Order in wrong they be may

But I must write them down

Paper me front in onto of the

As they may not come again

All and miss may you

These words of wisdom

Brain my come that from

Into your minds.


  • orchidee

    Ahh, you writing with poetic licence? Allowing words to be switched around! I do it sometimes to make lines rhyme.
    Good write Gold.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, just a bit o' fun.


    • dusk arising

      Was it dyslexia or simple dyspepsia brought this about..... have you tried peppermints..... the really REALLY strong ones will sort you out.

      Stop getting your muse inebriated.

      • Goldfinch60

        Dyspepsia really has a great deal for which to answer.
        Well it is only Calliope and me in the house now and we dare not leave and wine in the bottle.


      • Michael Edwards

        Words wot u thunked - great write and love DA.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thunked and writ with fun EM.


        • Fay Slimm.

          Ha ha - -- giggled at Dave's words of fun and then read your tongue twisters and giggled again - great end to my first day back on line Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            Good to see you back Fay.


          • Jerry Reynolds

            Fun stuff, Andy.

          • L. B. Mek

            yup I scribble my 'mad hatter's' notes of pitiful inspirations on my phone, then read them back a little later and I have no clue as to what I was trying to say, lol
            thanks for the fun read Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              Fun is good to have in our lives Mek.


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