This may not flow well
It may not even rhyme
But to be honest this card was on sale
And I was running out of time.
So below is a list
Of things I really love
Hopefully I can provide the jist
Of why you're held slightly above.
I love you more than DIE HARD
More than Holly loved John
More than his bare feet loved glass shards
More than the stack of stolen bonds
I love you more than BREAD
More then the warm, soft, sourdough
More than when it's served to me in bed
Even when there's so much butter, the bread doesn't show.
I love you more than WALKING
More than holes love my socks
More than the people I've been stalking
Even more than the bum I ignore, when he talks
But most of all I love you
(This next one was hard to say)
More than TERMINATOR 2
That's right, more than Judgement Day.
So by now I hope you realize
Exactly what you mean to me
So put the card down and look into my eyes
And maybe you'll see what I see.
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Comments2
Good write showing your love.
Andy
Thank you kindly for the read and compliment
You’ve certainly expressed your feelings in an honest way. I hope she ‘put the card down and looked into’ your eyes and saw what you saw.
A wonderful read my dear poet!
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
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