death fansthe smoldering embersof childhood
Good write Jerry.
I had to think about this - still not sure but certainly old age fans memories embers - I think my childhood more now than I have ever done.
I may change it to age at some point, Michael. My sister passed away recently and I am writing my way through the seven stages. http://www.artandadvertising.com/public/haiku-senryu-tanka-poems.html
I've just looked a the link - great work and I've added it to my bookmarks for later reread. Really impressed.
I'd vote for age, I think Jerry. Certainly childhood memories but others too, including the blunders.
Thanks, Dave. It all comes back for sure.
This can certainly happen when somebody close passes. Andy
Thanks, Andy.
so succinct, could excavate these seven words, to yield seventy diverse interpretations.. a great write Jerry
Thanks, L.B.
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Good write Jerry.
I had to think about this - still not sure but certainly old age fans memories embers - I think my childhood more now than I have ever done.
I may change it to age at some point, Michael. My sister passed away recently and I am writing my way through the seven stages.
http://www.artandadvertising.com/public/haiku-senryu-tanka-poems.html
I've just looked a the link - great work and I've added it to my bookmarks for later reread. Really impressed.
I'd vote for age, I think Jerry. Certainly childhood memories but others too, including the blunders.
Thanks, Dave. It all comes back for sure.
This can certainly happen when somebody close passes.
Andy
Thanks, Andy.
so succinct, could excavate these seven words, to yield seventy diverse interpretations..
a great write Jerry
Thanks, L.B.
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