Goldfinch60

Light In Our Lives.



In this grey cloud laden day

I looked around at the green,

The green swards that surrounded me,

So dark under the clouds.

But then I saw it,

I saw the field full of light,

Its yellow wonder so bright.

It showed me that no matter,

No matter how dark things are,

There is always light in our lives.

Comments8

  • yellowrose

    Lovely words 🙂 always light outside in nature ...

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you yellowrose, there always is.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write and pic Gold.

    • Michael Edwards

      And may there be always.

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true Michael.

        Andy

      • dusk arising

        Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest of times. A light which lifts our spirit.

        • Goldfinch60

          So very true d a.

          Andy

        • Accidental Poet

          That light never dims. I half expected to see Orchi's footprints all over this page. Well done Andy.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you AP.
            Orchi's footprints were there but then he started singing so I had to get rid of them.

            Andy

            • Accidental Poet

              Wise move. ; )

            • MendedFences27

              Thoroughly enjoyable, both poem and music. Yes I was toe tapping. Finding the light is everyone's end game. Some do and some never will. In nature, as brutal as it can be, somehow it seems to shine that light everywhere all the time.A very nice poem. - Phil A.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Phil. The light is always in our lives but some just do not see it.

                Andy

              • Teddy.15

                I like the message very much. And believe it to be true, on dark days I always remind myself this, it's very important in today's world. Thank you.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you for your kind words Teddy, much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • L. B. Mek

                  what a timely picture, wonderful of you to share and even better, ink a few hope filled lines for us to appreciate it, that much more..
                  and yes, music has me tap-tapping away on a cloudy monday morning
                  good read, thanks for sharing Andy

                  • Goldfinch60

                    My pleasure Mek.

                    Andy



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