brianna jean zeiger

dissonance .

your voice-


every syllable, 


every consonant,


derived from your mouth,


used to articulate the words you eloquently speak to me with,


fill my ears like a plethora of orchestras


all playing different chords, 


making perfect dissonance. 


Captivating me,


your voice,


your words,


are so unfathomably  





  • Goldfinch60

    Your words are the same brianna.


  • orchidee

    Good write Brianna.
    Yep. unfathomably alluring - unless it's me you're hearing singing! In which case it's just unfathomable to call it singing. heehee.

  • L. B. Mek

    if poetry can be described as having a mesmeric quality, then that's how I would describe my experience while reading your work,
    dragged my consciousness within its rhythmic realm, with the same allure of poignant musicality..
    just a great write! thanks for sharing

  • M.E.M.

    I like the topic and the way you arranged the lines. It’s like those lines that apear when talking on a recording, but vertically. You know what I mean? The visual works well the the message.

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