brianna jean zeiger

dissonance .

your voice-

 

every syllable, 

 

every consonant,

 

derived from your mouth,

 

used to articulate the words you eloquently speak to me with,

 

fill my ears like a plethora of orchestras

 

all playing different chords, 

 

making perfect dissonance. 

 

Captivating me,

 

your voice,

 

your words,

 

are so unfathomably  

 

alluring.

 

Comments4

  • Goldfinch60

    Your words are the same brianna.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write Brianna.
    Yep. unfathomably alluring - unless it's me you're hearing singing! In which case it's just unfathomable to call it singing. heehee.

  • L. B. Mek

    if poetry can be described as having a mesmeric quality, then that's how I would describe my experience while reading your work,
    dragged my consciousness within its rhythmic realm, with the same allure of poignant musicality..
    just a great write! thanks for sharing

  • M.E.M.

    I like the topic and the way you arranged the lines. It’s like those lines that apear when talking on a recording, but vertically. You know what I mean? The visual works well the the message.



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