your voice-
every syllable,
every consonant,
derived from your mouth,
used to articulate the words you eloquently speak to me with,
fill my ears like a plethora of orchestras
all playing different chords,
making perfect dissonance.
Captivating me,
your voice,
your words,
are so unfathomably
alluring.
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Author:
b.j. zeiger (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Surrealist
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Comments4
Your words are the same brianna.
Andy
Good write Brianna.
Yep. unfathomably alluring - unless it's me you're hearing singing! In which case it's just unfathomable to call it singing. heehee.
if poetry can be described as having a mesmeric quality, then that's how I would describe my experience while reading your work,
dragged my consciousness within its rhythmic realm, with the same allure of poignant musicality..
just a great write! thanks for sharing
I like the topic and the way you arranged the lines. It’s like those lines that apear when talking on a recording, but vertically. You know what I mean? The visual works well the the message.
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