The Day Is Ended.

Goldfinch60



The day is ended,

Up the stairs I walk,

I go into the bedroom

And I see it,

See it on the floor,

A white feather

Showing she’s there,

Still with me.

My lover has been there

In her new guise,

Her new guise

Of being an Angel,

Giving me her love,

Knowing that our love

Will never fail,

And when I get my wings,

My wings of an angel

We will fly together,

Together towards infinity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 5th, 2021 01:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is true, there was a white feather on the floor of my bedroom last night.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 48
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  • Saxon Crow

    I love this GF. We are never alone but always loved

    • Goldfinch60

      Very true SC that love is always there.

      Andy

    • Caring dove

      Lovely words goldfinch 🙂 white feathers are definitely a sign of an Angel ... glad you feel an Angel / she is there for you .

      • Goldfinch60

        They truly are a sign of angels in our lives yellowrose.

        Andy

      • Neville


        ... quite simply beautiful my friend .. I got a shiver down my spine as I read your splendid days offering .....

        • Goldfinch60

          So kind Neville, I too had shivers down my spine when I saw the feather.

          Andy

        • Fay Slimm.

          Angels are true helpers and loving
          messengers and the sign of a white feather must have given you such a pleasure dear friend. Love is forever .

          • Goldfinch60

            Angels certainly are loving, yes it gave me such pleasure - the feather will be saved.

            Andy

          • orchidee

            Good write Gold. Angels are said to have wings - made of feathers? So........
            I saw some feathers along part of a country walk. Maybe placed randomly on posts.
            Several posts had 1, 2, or 3 feathers in no particular sequence. I don't know if it had any meaning.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thanks Orchi, feathers can mean so much to people in many ways.

              Andy

            • dusk arising

              I love this piece. I bet you felt incredibly moved.
              Your so good to share precious times like this with us.
              You bolster my faith.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you d a, much appreciated. May your faith get stronger each moment.

                Andy

              • Accidental Poet

                Yes Angels are with you Andy. And one very special Angel. ; )

                • Goldfinch60

                  Very true AP. Thank youi.

                  Andy

                • Jerry Reynolds

                  Well done, Andy. Tender piece and peace to you.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Jerry, most kind.

                    Andy

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Another gem Andy.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Kind words Michael, thank you.

                      Andy



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