Out of the blue

Jerry Reynolds

 

Longing- 
Sips from the spring
Of might have been

  • Author: Jerry Reynolds (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 5th, 2021 06:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: Senryu Inspired by Neville Thanks, Pal
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
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  • dusk arising

    Brilliant.

    Short, sweet, punchy.

    Goes into my fav's.

  • orchidee

    Good write Jerry.

  • Neville


    Blimey guv'nor .. you very nearly took the words write out of my mouth ... and no kiddin .... only I think yours are somewhat sweeter ... good on ya 🙂

    • Jerry Reynolds

      Thanks, Nevile.
      Thanks for the inspiration, my poet friend.

    • Doggerel Dave

      Yes - you just bought a couple of bits of my past to the fore.... to do it in so few words.....can't really thank you for that Jerry, but all credit.....

      • Jerry Reynolds

        Thanks, Dave. While blowing some leaves off the red dirt road in my mind seems some spilled over on-to yours. Sorry about that.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Not to worry Jerry - I'm strong and will keep my chin up.......(sob)......

        • Saxon Crow

          Brilliant write Jerry. What is it with Neville the cheeky little catalyst that he is!

          • Jerry Reynolds

            Thanks, S.C. He is a very good poet, what you see is what you get.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Superb - - says so much in only three lines.

          • Michael Edwards

            Wow - short and sharp - a punch well delivered.

          • Goldfinch60

            That spring has a great deal for which to answer Jerry.

            Andy

          • Big T

            A few words triggers so many thoughts. Very nice.



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