The sun sets in its lazy, hazy way
Content from the masterpiece it made
Shadows stretch and yawn, settled from the day
Softly painting pictures wherever they choose to lay
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Saxon Crow (
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Leading us into ' The Starry Night'. Good words SC.
Andy
Ta da! Took me bloody ages to write this one. Just goes to show! Thanks GF
Lovely words , says so much in a few lines . I like the idea of the suns shadows “ stretching and yawning “ and it being a masterpiece
Thanks YR. Glad you liked it
With a good upending in the title and good ending in four lines, you have, I believe cracked it, Sax.
Thanks Dave. I appreciate it. Strangely this one took me bloody ages to put together. Funny old world
Love it, so glad you are posting again.
This is one for my fav's for sure.
Thanks Dusk. I'm honoured that you like it 🙂
Oops lol! Why it take ya ages to write this one?! There ain't no extra-long words in it. Well, masterpiece is quite a long word, I admit!
A fine write SC.
I had to actually think! Very taxing experience. I need to go lay down now
It's that thinking that does it - it's too much for us! heehee.
Does it depend what time of day we think? Can we face a lot of thinking first thing in the day?!
Argh! Ive a headache coming on thinking about it!
This is getting to be like - 'Am I Me, Myself, or I? Or am I all three?!'
Yes yes yes
this both looks as good as it reads ..
.. and reads as good as it looks..
Thanks Nev. Much appreciated
brilliant!
Thanks LB
I have seen some amazing sunrises and sunsets this year and this little gem is spot on.
Thanks Mike. Me too
It's not often I say WOW. But WOW! So much in so few words. WOW ; )
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