Amen!
as your Art
a wonderful window into your wisdom
your words offer;
sombre tones, but colourful
like the hopeful heart
gifting them, that brushstroke of life
Michael, for me this evoked very visual images, as the first line gave me a picture of a wide open and naturally fertile landscape, while the second saw a heavy duty bulldozer right through the middle.
Never got that much out of a shorty before.
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Good write M.
Is this about Miss Drib Berles and Miss Drab Berles?!
Miss Gob Berles methinks.
So very true Michael.
Do I see a new artform being explored?
Andy
Could be - inspired by a photo of paving in Paphos which I took some time ago.
Amen!
as your Art
a wonderful window into your wisdom
your words offer;
sombre tones, but colourful
like the hopeful heart
gifting them, that brushstroke of life
Thanks LB - your comments, as always, are themselves like poetry.
Michael, for me this evoked very visual images, as the first line gave me a picture of a wide open and naturally fertile landscape, while the second saw a heavy duty bulldozer right through the middle.
Never got that much out of a shorty before.
Thanks DD - perhaps I should reverse the two lines to end on a happier note?
I see a new creative vision here.
Always trying.
Yet I can be both!
And me. It's hard being normal.
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