Just a Kiss Goodbye

Just a Kiss Goodbye


She said, hey love,

look up

There is a cross in

the sky

He said, no babe,

it’s not ..

It is just a kiss goodbye ..



  • Goldfinch60

    So few words, so full of emotion.


    • Neville

      ... Ta Andy πŸ™‚

    • Fay Slimm.

      Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families apart. A skillful write again Nev...............x

      • Neville

        Thank you kindly Fay and like Carlsberg .. probably more than you might ever know .... x

      • dusk arising

        That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
        I'm not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.

        • Neville

          under those circumstances, how can I not thank you for popping in ......... see, I just can't .. thank you πŸ™‚

        • L. B. Mek

          this is deep, nudges forgotten bruises
          on a lot of levels...
          such a thought provoking read, my friend
          (hope you have a clear sky - weekend) 😎

          • Neville

            ............... cheers my friend .. we shall have to wait and see, but thanks for visiting and the kind thought, which I plan to try and hold on to .... πŸ™‚

          • Trenz Pruca


            • Neville

              I'll take anything that's going cheers Trenz πŸ™‚

            • SureshG


              • Neville

                Cheers πŸ™‚

              • Michael Edwards

                I'm a lover of the short verse and this is yop notch.

                • Neville

                  You made I feel on yop of the world sir and thank you for that πŸ™‚

                • Saxon Crow

                  Very nicely played Nev. Great poem

                  • Neville

                    very nice of you to drop in like that SC ......... cheers πŸ™‚

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Can you say that's a beautiful rhyme to many times, not if each one can bring a tear to your eye!

                    Always a pleasure to fly in your sky, keep floating my friend

                    • Neville

                      ......... sure gonna try Dan ... thanks a zillion & then some πŸ™‚

                    • Jerry Reynolds

                      Good write, Neville.
                      We seem to be better at hellos and good buys, than that space in-between.

                      • Neville

                        Good to hear from you Jerry and couldn't agree more sir .. many thanks indeed πŸ™‚

                      • myself and me

                        They are not looking at the same sky, or are they?

                        • Neville

                          Yep, my guess is that they indirectly woz ... thanks for noticing my friend .... πŸ™‚

                        • Laura🌻


                          A very sensitive and delicate subject matter you’ve succinctly and masterfully expressed with your poetic pen.

                          Powerful my dear poet.

                          Thank you for sharing.


                          • Neville

                            Thank you my friend, a much appreciated visit and always welcome ............. πŸ™‚ 🌻

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