That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
I'm not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.
............... cheers my friend .. we shall have to wait and see, but thanks for visiting and the kind thought, which I plan to try and hold on to .... 🙂
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So few words, so full of emotion.
Andy
... Ta Andy 🙂
Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families apart. A skillful write again Nev...............x
Thank you kindly Fay and like Carlsberg .. probably more than you might ever know .... x
That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
I'm not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.
under those circumstances, how can I not thank you for popping in ......... see, I just can't .. thank you 🙂
this is deep, nudges forgotten bruises
on a lot of levels...
such a thought provoking read, my friend
(hope you have a clear sky - weekend) 😎
............... cheers my friend .. we shall have to wait and see, but thanks for visiting and the kind thought, which I plan to try and hold on to .... 🙂
Wow!
I'll take anything that's going cheers Trenz 🙂
Brilliant!
Cheers 🙂
I'm a lover of the short verse and this is yop notch.
You made I feel on yop of the world sir and thank you for that 🙂
Very nicely played Nev. Great poem
very nice of you to drop in like that SC ......... cheers 🙂
Can you say that's a beautiful rhyme to many times, not if each one can bring a tear to your eye!
Always a pleasure to fly in your sky, keep floating my friend
......... sure gonna try Dan ... thanks a zillion & then some 🙂
Good write, Neville.
We seem to be better at hellos and good buys, than that space in-between.
Good to hear from you Jerry and couldn't agree more sir .. many thanks indeed 🙂
They are not looking at the same sky, or are they?
Yep, my guess is that they indirectly woz ... thanks for noticing my friend .... 🙂
Neville,
A very sensitive and delicate subject matter you’ve succinctly and masterfully expressed with your poetic pen.
Powerful my dear poet.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
Thank you my friend, a much appreciated visit and always welcome ............. 🙂 🌻
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