When building illusions
the higher you build
the greater the ruins.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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When building illusions
the higher you build
the greater the ruins.
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Nicely put and an excellent piece of art Mike
So true Michael.
Andy
When flying high, the further to fall.
I'm a fan of your wisdom in verse.
Good write and pic M.
Have I been on holiday with Miss Berles?
Nope, I got cut orf for a while!
A great short-line but needed reminder Mike to watch the height of our daydreaming - - - and I just love the intensity of those reflections in your beautiful water colour.
Just like that the bubble pops!
Amen!
I just love
your sparingly detailed watercolour paintings Michael
and that defiantly disobedient: Haiku
in both wording and rule breaking - ease, lol
a great read, thank you!
greeneries race
on watery path
'Got the solution: Keep my illusions to myself and let gently declining memory remove them gently (works for me).
A great vision of 'a green and pleasant land', Michael.
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