Michael Edwards

DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5)

 

When building illusions

the higher you build

the greater the ruins.

Comments10

  • Saxon Crow

    Nicely put and an excellent piece of art Mike

  • Goldfinch60

    So true Michael.

    Andy

  • dusk arising

    When flying high, the further to fall.

    I'm a fan of your wisdom in verse.

  • orchidee

    Good write and pic M.
    Have I been on holiday with Miss Berles?
    Nope, I got cut orf for a while!

  • Fay Slimm.

    A great short-line but needed reminder Mike to watch the height of our daydreaming - - - and I just love the intensity of those reflections in your beautiful water colour.

  • Poetic Dan

    Just like that the bubble pops!

  • L. B. Mek

    Amen!
    I just love
    your sparingly detailed watercolour paintings Michael
    and that defiantly disobedient: Haiku
    in both wording and rule breaking - ease, lol
    a great read, thank you!

  • The Uneducated O.A.P

    And more for the landfill.
    Great art from Eddie the Easel.
    Nice shorty, no I don't mean your short! Lol

  • Jerry Reynolds

    greeneries race
    on watery path

  • Doggerel Dave

    'Got the solution: Keep my illusions to myself and let gently declining memory remove them gently (works for me).
    A great vision of 'a green and pleasant land', Michael.



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