Summer and fall fell in love
Winter, a sweet child cool and fair
Left home for a bluebird
With flowers in her hair
Unsheathed together
On the meadow of time
Spring and summer
Smelling the emotion
I knew you before
But when and where
- Author: Jerry Reynolds ( Offline)
- Published: August 9th, 2021 09:47
- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by Fay and Neville
- Category: Love
- Views: 45
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, L. B. Mek
Comments7
What an honour to be part of the inspiration for this piece of charming imagery Jerry - - delighted thanks from a smiling me for your very kind dedication.
Thanks, Fay.
Somewhere behind consciousness, it all seems to be connected.
I aint gonna argue with the Lady JR .. I am well n truly honoured too sir .. 🙂
Thanks, Neville.
A fine write Jerry.
Thanks, Orchidee.
Super piece - enjoyed the read.
Thanks, Michael.
Spring and Summer are my favorite time of year. Well penned Jerry. 😉
Thanks, A.P.
The emotions that lay within the seasons show us our true lives Jerry.
Andy
Thanks, Andy.
'Left home for a bluebird
With flowers in her hair
Unsheathed together
On the meadow of time'..
like our season's,
the people in our lives
tend to have a rhythm
to their coming's and going's
some, we recognise immediately
after a long separation
other's,
we're yearning to remember
even, as they're passing-by...
(a great write Jerry, and as-ever
I owe your Artistry, for inspiring
my little scribbled reply
thank you,
what a talent you choose to share)
Thanks, L.B.
I am humbled. You do have a gift for writing quickly I struggle with that.
its not much of a gift
the quick, is often - first
to be forgotten, it seems
(ask the Hare)
much better to treasure
those nuggets - found
after taking the necessary time
to pen a worthwhile write
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