This Heart.
When I, led sleepless through uneasy dark
sigh lonely for thee.
When moon rides high its wide curved arc
and cold falls crisp on flower and tree.
When sun bids farewell to skyline's blue
and a mist covers first starlight with dew
how I sigh for thee.
When I, dreaming walk lone ocean waves
again sigh for thee.
When wind rides high spume's briny lace
and a moon turns pale its filters on me.
When Neptune roams his wild-water hall
and foaming white horses rise only to fall
how I sigh for thee.
When I, wakened bone-tired before dawn
sigh weary for thee.
When sun rises high as day becomes worn
and noon lies basking over calmed leat.
When distance between us taxes this heart
and needed commitment keeps us apart
how I sigh for thee.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: September 22nd, 2021 03:35
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love the imagery and the way you word it. good write indeed
Delighted you dropped by for a read and comment and thanking you most sincerely Noah
Stunning! Beautiful! Fay you have created a magnificent work of art here. Every line beautifully crafted and full of emotion. Worthy in today's english yet referencing back to classic poetry giving a timeless presence.
I can't praise this piece enough, full of admiration of your poetic enchantment here.
Tops the bill in my favourites.
P.S. did i mention I like it?
Overwhelmingly delighted that you feel this verse worthy of poetic top billing dear Dusk - - so glad it meant so much to your assessment of what is enchanting -- - my blushing thanks for your generous comment.
Very beautiful , Fay 🙂 you truly have a lovely way with words ... a lovely read 🌸
And it is a pleasure to know you enjoyed the read dear Rose.
Beautiful, Fay.
You keep setting the bar higher as you go. Thank you.
Most appreciated for not only your visit and read but the kind compliment - - poetic bars are made to leap over however high we may think them to be.
Good write Fay.
... this is indeed poetry my lady ... N x
Glad you liked the emotive feel of the piece Nev. Thanking you dearly - - and truly...............x
What can I say that hasn't already been said here Fay. A deserving romantic read. 🌹
So pleased you enjoyed the read and that is always enough for me dear A.P.
Yes Fay - I've felt all of that, but there's no way I would attempt to express it - I leave that to people (this person -you) who can do the job properly.
Your being able to relate to the feel of the piece is such a delight and thanks for sharing that Dave. Your warm heart comes through in all your comments my friend.
Wonderful words Fay, that emotion pours from your words.
Andy
I had hoped the piece would be received as sincere and from your kind comment it looks as if the emotion showed through - many thanks for your constant support dear Andy.
My Dear Fay,
As I read your incredible poem, I sense and feel the sadness your words are conveying. You are a master at your craft. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
P.S.- Fay, I like your new pic. Lovely😊
Dear Laura - -Appreciation galore for your calling in for a read of This Heart - am delighted you sensed the emotive side of the versing I tried for when all around seems to accent the miss of a loved one - - Oh and and hugs aplenty for the kind P.S. - - am so green with computer techniques etc and that new pic.took way past midnight to minimize but pleasing to get all the features into the tiny space in the end. - - xx Fay
A heartfelt beautiful poem..
So grateful Floreann for your visit and comment on This Heart - - - I was hoping it expressed depth of both love and need.
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