I wonder
as I walk these paths
where once we trod
long ago
arm in arm
sharing the peace
of our mutual love
surrounded by
creation's bliss
Yes i wonder
if similar thoughts
enter your distant heart
And...
If there is a life to come
after we pass
where
will such wonders roam
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dusk arising (
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I wonder where they will roam. Being a non-believer in the after world I feel a bit cheated - never will I get the opportunity to say: 'I told you so!' Great write dusk
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LOL good to see u participating ME. I'm hoping you and yours are well and staying safe.
A fine write dusk.
There are a lot of people I would like to meet, and a lot I would like to send to another place. Wonder if that's possible.
I hadn't considered sending people places, i'm guessing u meant to hell.... i'm a non believer in that place, just a tool to instill fear in little children.... fear some cannot rid themselves of.
A fine write, Dusk.
I will ponder this all day.
Don't do that my friend, write some wholesome poetry instead.
Your poem surely left me to wonder !! Nice sparks of thought !!
Yes I did throw that last part in to tease the poetic mind. Thank you for looking in and commenting.
Find heart, for this love story will come to pass, when it recalls your poetic words in life yet to come
A great believer in reincarnation here.... but there's only one way to test that theory and i'm not ready yet LOL. Thank you SureshG.
Your wonders will continue to roam d a after passing, I know mine will.
Andy
We all do mate, I imagine that not one of us hasn't at some time or another .. and most of us do all the time ... apart from that .. I would just like to point out that you my fine friend and poet have just penned and posted a cracker ..... N
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