Shy

Neville

Shy

 

Until the very first time

when

she let him see her

naked

She would hide her

perfect form in shadows

deep ..

Yes indeed, until that

first time

She always tended to

recline

somewhere much more

covertly

between the sunscreen

and the

privacy her parasol

demanded ..

Halfway between those

high hills

some called mountains

and the shallow

lace edged coves of Crete

But as her

holiday progressed

She just could not bear

to save those

hidden depths of hers

another week ..

And so it was decided

after one half pint

of local raki, on day nine

or thereabouts ..

She finally relented and

let him feel

her naked for the first

time with

curtains drawn and all

the lights off ..

Still out of sight somewhere

beneath those

freshly laundered hotel sheets

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 3rd, 2021 03:44
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  • Fay Slimm.

    A pleasure indeed to read that finally all barriers down she can enjoy her naked shape quite shamelessly - - an alluring peek into remembered intimacy which Crete seemingly offered freely - - OOooh must go for a cold shower -gone a bit hot here amigo..............x

    • Neville



      On reflection, I think I might just join ya .... hotch up just a little bit our Fay .. but not too much eh' .. x

      • Fay Slimm.

        ........................................................... rightio ........................

      • Michael Edwards

        Ahhh - I was there. Great read.

        • Neville



          thanks Michael .. it is so good to see you back here my friend .. I know things have not been easy for you recently & have been thinking of you ............................. N

        • Goldfinch60

          Good alluring words Neville.

          Andy

          • Neville



            thank you Andy ..................... I always look forward to your visits my friend .. your comments invariably make me smile ... N

          • Garth Rakumakoe

            Excellently crafted! I love the shape of it! - Or should it be the shape of her? - Thank you for sharing.

            • Neville



              Many thank you's for taking a peek kind sir .. very much appreciated ............ Neville

            • orchidee

              Good write N.
              She was going to reveal all to me, but I fainted, and Fido revived me! lol.

              • Neville



                Why am I not surprised Mr. O ............................... at least you recovered enough to swoon again 🙂

              • dusk arising

                Nights in white satin.....

                Well, better late than never. The things these ladies will do to give us the impression of purity when inside they are just........

                LOvely teaser of a poem today.

                • Neville



                  am so glad you squeezed in DA ............ I woz just about to shut up shop .. its been another long day 🙂



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