My Lady is More Than a Poem

Neville

My Lady is More Than a Poem

 

My lady is more than a poem

in the making,

she is something far greater

than that ..

She is a canvass, both shaded

and coloured,

yet hungry to have all her fine

details filled in ..

As a matter of fact, she is as

superbly crafted

and sound as the sleekest of

sea faring vessels by far ..

Yet without a shadow of doubt,

she is finer

than that even .. a keeper

to cherish, to respect and admire ..

Regardless, of distance or time ..

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  • Michael Edwards

    You must have met my wife - I've been blessed - and a good read to boot.

    • Neville



      ................. I guess we both have .. thank you Michael ...

    • Caring dove

      Lovely words 🙂

      • Neville



        thank you kindly Rose ..................................... Neville 🙂

      • orchidee

        Ahh, so I can't meet her? You'll keep her all to yourself. 🙂

        • Neville



          I'm a nice guy but I think that's a fair assumption Mr. O .......................................... N 🙂

        • L. B. Mek

          no such thing
          as wasted time or feelings
          in the face: of true love
          just, rewards to call upon
          at a distance
          or from right, by our side...
          (anther brilliant write, dear Poet
          so relatable,
          words to dive within
          so we may immerse ourselves
          in all the memories
          they help deliver)

          • Neville



            Thanks L.B .... I owe ya ................................................................................. N

          • dusk arising

            Shallow bottomed and responds well to wind eh? Does she crest the waves of your storm in midnight's haste and becalmed seduce you with a glance?

            There's a vacant local mooring ready for her sister within sight.

            • Neville



              ........................................ I'll put a good word in for ya DA ............ in the meantime, cheers n truly 🙂

            • Fay Slimm.

              No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon ami - - a keeper indeed for my faves. and superbly written.............x

              • Neville



                how seriously kind my lady Fay .................. thank you so bloomin muchly .................. x

              • Dove

                Tis beautiful poetry! Cherish her curves, while working on her canvas, Remember to sprinkle the colors of love!

                • Neville



                  Consider it done ..................... thank you for hanging around my friend ................................. N x

                • SureshG

                  Much, much more than a poem, an artist palette, that streamlined yacht or anything nature can draft, except your words

                  • Neville



                    You are too good for words ... so I shall just say & BIG Thank you & mean it ........................... N

                  • Laura🌻

                    Neville,

                    A ‘keeper’ indeed…………

                    ‘to cherish, to respect and admire ..
                    Regardless, of distance or time ..’

                    as is your beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading this fine not.

                    Kudos 👏🏻👏🏻

                    Laura🌻

                    • Neville



                      Yep .. the way it oughta be ............................ & thank you so much for putting in an appearance this eve my friend .................. more appreciated than you might imagine ................................ N

                      • Laura🌻


                        (So sorry about the typo.) 😞

                        …should’ve written ‘this fine write’, instead of ‘this fine not’!

                        • Neville



                          no worries my lady Laura, I thought you meant (notte) night .................. 🙂 🌻

                          • Laura🌻

                            I like the way you think…always positive…
                            “notte” would fit in perfectly………
                            Have a wonderful weekend…🤗🌻

                          • Jerry Reynolds

                            A fine write, Neville.
                            I write about my wife often.

                            • Neville



                              Good man ................................................ N

                            • Doggerel Dave

                              So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own piece there, Nev - 'superbly crafted'.

                              • Neville



                                well punned me frund ......................................... and thank you, you old dog you ................... N 🙂

                              • Goldfinch60

                                What a wonderful poem about your lady, I feel the same about mine even now.

                                Andy

                                • Neville



                                  Of course you do, we all know that my Golden friend .. for ever & always ... Thank you Andy 🙂

                                • Draven

                                  Quite beautiful!

                                  • Neville



                                    bless you my new found literary friend ........................................................... x

                                  • myself and me

                                    Wow, wow, wow. Regardless of distance or time, lovely poem ever.

                                    • Neville



                                      Wow .. UR far 2 kind 2 me M&M ...................................................................... N 🙂



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