My Lady is More Than a Poem
My lady is more than a poem
in the making,
she is something far greater
than that ..
She is a canvass, both shaded
and coloured,
yet hungry to have all her fine
details filled in ..
As a matter of fact, she is as
superbly crafted
and sound as the sleekest of
sea faring vessels by far ..
Yet without a shadow of doubt,
she is finer
than that even .. a keeper
to cherish, to respect and admire ..
Regardless, of distance or time ..
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Author:
Neville (
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You must have met my wife - I've been blessed - and a good read to boot.
................. I guess we both have .. thank you Michael ...
Lovely words 🙂
thank you kindly Rose ..................................... Neville 🙂
Ahh, so I can't meet her? You'll keep her all to yourself. 🙂
I'm a nice guy but I think that's a fair assumption Mr. O .......................................... N 🙂
no such thing
as wasted time or feelings
in the face: of true love
just, rewards to call upon
at a distance
or from right, by our side...
(anther brilliant write, dear Poet
so relatable,
words to dive within
so we may immerse ourselves
in all the memories
they help deliver)
Thanks L.B .... I owe ya ................................................................................. N
Shallow bottomed and responds well to wind eh? Does she crest the waves of your storm in midnight's haste and becalmed seduce you with a glance?
There's a vacant local mooring ready for her sister within sight.
........................................ I'll put a good word in for ya DA ............ in the meantime, cheers n truly 🙂
No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon ami - - a keeper indeed for my faves. and superbly written.............x
how seriously kind my lady Fay .................. thank you so bloomin muchly .................. x
Tis beautiful poetry! Cherish her curves, while working on her canvas, Remember to sprinkle the colors of love!
Consider it done ..................... thank you for hanging around my friend ................................. N x
Much, much more than a poem, an artist palette, that streamlined yacht or anything nature can draft, except your words
You are too good for words ... so I shall just say & BIG Thank you & mean it ........................... N
Neville,
A ‘keeper’ indeed…………
‘to cherish, to respect and admire ..
Regardless, of distance or time ..’
as is your beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading this fine not.
Kudos 👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
Yep .. the way it oughta be ............................ & thank you so much for putting in an appearance this eve my friend .................. more appreciated than you might imagine ................................ N
(So sorry about the typo.) 😞
…should’ve written ‘this fine write’, instead of ‘this fine not’!
2 more comments
A fine write, Neville.
I write about my wife often.
Good man ................................................ N
So be it sweetheart or vessel you have never the less described your own piece there, Nev - 'superbly crafted'.
well punned me frund ......................................... and thank you, you old dog you ................... N 🙂
What a wonderful poem about your lady, I feel the same about mine even now.
Andy
Of course you do, we all know that my Golden friend .. for ever & always ... Thank you Andy 🙂
Quite beautiful!
bless you my new found literary friend ........................................................... x
Wow, wow, wow. Regardless of distance or time, lovely poem ever.
Wow .. UR far 2 kind 2 me M&M ...................................................................... N 🙂
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