Incomparable.
Let all our dreamscapes revive first making
when tones of a moon-silvered sea poured
molten thirst on youthful excess.
Let our passion-flamed eyelids see no sad
regret when reviewing snatched kisses hot
with furnace of covert treasure.
Let that incomparable music of oneness scent
our hearts with remembered perfume of time
tuned to honing coupled pleasure.
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Fay Slimm. (
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nonpariel is a word I have only rarely used before ... but, it seems appropriate to use write here & now .. x
How honoured I feel to know you have chosen that fabulous word to describe my attempts to explain "Incomparable" - - am spoiled to bits by your kind generosity. Thanking you muchly and more mon ami.....................x.
And upon that plane may the pleasing calm of slumber overide these aches of age and blissfully accompany my dreams into embraces of passionate fervour where youth and vigour excite to life.
I was taken into your poetry wholeheartedly.
You sure were taken into the passion of the incomparable course of young love dear Dusky and glad you are now feeling calmer after its storm .
Oh the joys of youthful reverie recaptured as I read your forever incomparable words.
And sincere thanks dear Mike for your visit and comment - - glad you too like the word incomparable - -for I thought it apt.
…and so now you torment us with blissful words, for its not enough to have left the youth behind and just reminisce….
Ooooh dear friend I never meant to torment with the idea of a quick reminisce to those days of young love's endevour . Hoping the bliss of remembered experience makes up for any signs of aging - - your comment is making me look in the mirror and think of re-writing some of this verse. Love it to bits though
Please don’t, the romance is in your words
Bit of French there from Neville?! lol.
Non-wotsit. A fine write Fay.
Glad you enjoyed the read dear Orchi.
My Dear Fay,
Your awesome poem is definitely in a class of its own. Your writings amaze me. It’s such a pleasure and delight to read your poetry.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
Hello dear Laura - and a very big thank you for all your support of my literary offerings - -am so grateful you enjoyed the read of Incomparable.
You’re most welcome, my dear Fay.🤗
Beautiful, Fay.
Love does have a way of staying young. I still feel sexy at 83.
Great you still feel that way Jerry my friend - sex keeps us young - - love is indeed ageless and takes no note of years. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.
Memories of such delightful times Fay.
Andy
Thank you for your comment and - Yes memories when happy can do so much dear Andy as you must well know.
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