No Longer in The Making
He chose to wear Oud Oak that day and she, Patchouli
Oh’ but if only
All the rest might now be long consigned to history ..
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Neville (
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Perfumed as such no wonder their memory could not be forgotten - you mention my two favourite scents dear Nev........ wonder just how you knew - cos not many know that.
Now that is what I seriously call amazing ............ thank you dear Fay .. hope you & yours are all safe, well and preparing for a FAB Crimble .................................................................................... x
Patchouli for me every time. Often found permeating the air in my abode.
Another of your romances with which each poet may romance. For fragrance is the tardis of the heart, immediatly transporting us through time to a specialness when we were alive at the sharp end of life.
it is kinda special innit ..................... cheers DA ................................... 🙂 N
Good write N.
Crimble or Crumble - apple, that is?!
............................................................... thanks for crumbling along for the ride Mr. O .............. 🙂
Made made pheromones to attract the ladies attention or simply to make us feel special. Brevity at its finest.
Who knows, but I get the feeling you may just be write ............................................ cheers 🙂
A very good one Neville
It just gave me inspiration
Two beautiful scents whose fragrance so different yet so mingling
aww .. wot a wonderful scentiment spiller .. thank you ever so much & if these words gave you inspiration, then they are happy words indeed ........................................................... Neville x
Feel like Hannibal sniffing through the glass. I don't recognize that scent, Clarice.
but you are obviously hungry ...................................... and I thank you Paul .. might I suggest you go get those olfactory nerves looked at before Xmas tho' .......................................................... 🙂
Wow in just a few words a story emerged. Amazing!
how amazingly cool ............. bless you my friend ............................... many thanks indeed and with best wishes for the fast approaching festive season and new year .............. Neville
Perfumed imagery - the lid removed.
impossible to replace once opened ............................ a bit like your good self my friend .... ta for stopping by & leaving a little bit of your self behind ............ seasons finest to ya Michael ... N
The smell of wonder in our lives once more Neville.
Andy
I could scents something positive was forthcoming sir ................... cheers GF60 ... N 🙂
lookup
'Sovereign by Boadicea the Victorious'
and realise
they got away, quite cheaply
some costs
hinder more than our reverie...
(a spear thrust, of poetry
sharp and right to the point
but with grace enough
to be delivered from a distance,
so we can curl away
from enduring too much
of the suffering, it brings back
so vividly aromatic..)
your poetry at its irresistibly
subtle best, my friend
this old fella can not thank you enough sir ................................................ looked up and now on my christmas prezzie list .............................. N
lmao
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