An excited mind
a curious soul
a hearty stomach
a broken heart
a wary body
and an empty pocket
walked as whole
On way to a platform
On way to catch a train
on way to another city
on way to gain another opportunity
on way to overturn the wrongs
on way to fate; doing it’s dance
to watch new scenes
to hear new talks
to view new places
to learn new songs
to speak new languages
to eat different delicacies
to make new friends
to earn dignity
to develop new bonds
to strengthen heart core
to be a part of human library
walking
singing
dancing
went on and on
manoeuvring
hiking
galloping
went on and on
painting
drawing
calligraphing
went on and on
what did the soul receive?
a revival at peace
a new inside
is it reborn this time
is life wonderful
is life beautiful
will the story be new
there are no heroes and no villains
only
but only puppeteers on stage
the stage of drama called “world” on play…
the heart broken no more
glued to its core
A chaos outside
a melody inside
hearty it was
hearty it is
marching on its way to world peace….
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Great words , spiller ! 🙂 such an engaging read .. nicely expressed , good flow too
Thanks dear Rose
Looks like universe engaging us together
You read mine
I read yours
Thanks for such kind comments of yours
I’m really liking your writings .., 🙂
That’s ok .
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Your piece opens up like an adventure and closes with questions....
..... each will have their own honest resolution of those questions.......
...... for each one of us is the world, we cannot live for a better world unless we live that better world in our hearts right now, right here.
I agree with you
Like charity begins at home
Peace is first inside and then broadcasted around
A happy mind sings happy songs
A good memory makes a good picture
I hope the new year brings happiness and smiles
I wish the gloomy news disappear soon
And I hope you liked this piece
It’s an adventure but there are questions
And to those questions there are tailored answers suited to our tastes
Let’s see what journey is set for
An optimistic poem , and really likes these lines
"A chaos outside
a melody inside
hearty it was
hearty it is
marching on its way to world peace…. '
Yes !! inner peace should never be to pieces, whatever we are going through. That's the power which lies inherent in us, and its time you did tap that energy out..
Its time you shed out your old feathers and get a new flight like an Eagle. The sky is your limit..:)
Loved reading the lines again and again...Thanks Spiller...!!!
A beautiful review my dear Friend…so encouraging…yes just like an eagle the heart desires to soar high….thank you so much dear Vamsi…some comments makes one smile and boosts them to face the challenges in life…and thankfully I have such encouragements
Ah, 2022. Will it be a Boris free year.
Will we grow more arms for more jabs?
Will we be covid free?
It's such an exciting thought, I'm going down the pub to drink to it.
Ok, the pub is shut. Cooking sherry it is then.
Lol
What a food for thought
More jabs or how hopeful the heart is a close chapter for covid
I wish it’s RIP for the deadly virus
Yeah, sooner the better.
Good write S.
Thanks Orchi
Very nicely described emotional and deep. ☺
Thank you so much dear woundedheart…
So many unknowns, challenges to be faced. A great write.
Thanks dear Rozina
Glad you liked it..
May that march to peace soon be ended spilleronsheet and peace becomes the way of our world.
Andy
Very true dear Andy
May it happen soon
Absolutely loved this from start to end! Thank you my friend
Thanks a lot dear poetic Dan
Glad you liked it
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