An over thinker sat on a crouch
looking high up in clouds
is it a mathematical equation
or life posing numerous questions
an over thinker walked amidst the crowds
people chatting by
he thought he was criticised
they were looking at the streets
but he thought there were stares all along the streets
An over thinker overheard a conversation
eavesdropping maybe was his nature
he learned some one was sad
someone was fired after gone mad
he wept
he cried
no it wasn’t his job
yet he got connected with the soul
the over thinker was advised
to close ears
to close eyes
to shutter the over racing mind
the over thinker replied
my tears can’t elevate the poor soul
my solutions can’t bring a knocking door
the over thinker cried and smiled
a dilemma running over his clueless mind
those with limited thoughts your lucky being your way
while i am overthinking on my way
but in lost humanity i am trying my way……
In deep thoughts
in deep insights
Do you know what did the over thinker conclude?
take a guess…..
to the closed doors of opportunities
people say new doors open again
but in my crumbled and jumbled thoughts
a window of world shall open
not all doors are meant for me
maybe a sympathy and empathy of window is required
a doorbell of understanding
a greet of warmth
a hug of happiness
a smile of cheers
and simple words
”its okay to overthink,
but don’t dwell too much in words
You thought a lot
Now take rest”
with cold air of breathes
I sleep with thoughts and rest
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Another great poem ! ššespecially like the ending verse ā¦
Brilliant ā¦ nicely expressed , so engaging !
Thanks dear Rose
As poets most of us are over thinkers
Yep, I'd gleefully go along with all that (I think LOL).
Haha
Arenāt we faster than cheetah when it comes to our mindā¦.
I 'think' I will say it's a good poem. Doh! It's got me doing it now - overthinking, that is! lol.
Lol
Orchi
I feel your solid with your thoughts
Did teef sway with emotions?
You got teef trouble too, as Teddy15 has?! lol.
Dear Spiller, Awesome gripping one altogether. Your flow of words just grabs us into your world.
The medicine for overthinker is to enagage in an entirely new skill, or get into a new opportunity. The disease for sure cured š
But pls keep thinking, else we would not get these masterpieces from you ......
I had the disease
Itās troubling to live with so many thoughts
Thanks for the cure my God doctor
Sure I donāt think i can easily get away from this disease
Shall keep thinking
And glad you liked my over racing mind
Over thinker, self-conscious, and probably a million other traits.
It's a tough life that one, but lived by many. In saying that, when I'm at the football I'm usually over thinking how bad this lot are.
It sure is
And from the poetry of yours, i am sure you sorted many of those thoughts
Thatās great to think while play
But what if your tricked when someone already did a goalā¦.
The crowd collapse when we score a goal, the trainer takes on oxygen and overdoses himself.
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you know its good when one's mental muscle begs for mercy & submits before the concluding full stop is placed ............................... perfectly spilt my friend ............. N
Deep wording
Maybe a help can conclude the puzzles running in mind
Thank you so much Neville
I am glad you liked it
Good words spilleronsheet, I always say to people āthinking is dangerousā.
Andy
Thanks dear Andy
It truly is
And only with experiences one can learn to calm oneself
We all over think our own problems and miss the simple solution of the lateral thinkers . Love your message. āŗ
Thank you dear Woundedheart
Exactly each one of us overthinks
And much more this disease is contagious to poet society, I assume
I am also guilty of overthinking sometimes. Good lines.
Cheers to you dear Rozina
I guess we all are criminals therein
Sometimes always
Sometimes rarely
Thanks, I am glad you liked it
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