The road to success
everyone claims
everyone cheers
and so does everyone fantasise
a young child
looks up at the star
wishes to be a star
a young student
looks up at a scientist
and wishes to reach the moon
a young teenage looks up at high buildings
and wishes to be an architect
a young girl
sees the plane in sky
wishes to fly
a young boy looks at the industry
wishes to make money
a young lad hears the speech
wishes to be a leader next
so we are told
told about the road to success
everyone tells us it’s hard
you must work hard
everyone tells us to read
without worrying about bread
everyone tells us to be focused
rather distracted
they say there is a win
on the mountain next
All trials are just a moment of time
you shall soon chime
Alas
success isn’t easy
the road is tough
it’s lonely
it takes up your rest
sooner you realise your walking alone
rather too much alone
no one knows for how long
the journey is boring
while you are snoring
the journey is tiring
even though you are trying
maybe success can take away all your pains
but till zenith is reached
the reality is
journey isn’t poetic
it’s not mesmerising
at moment of distress
close your eyes
whisper slowly to your mind
you move towards success
so is your zenith moving towards you
it’s a journey
a journey of challenging yourself
write a poetry or two
sing a song when down
cause your not a clown
a joker can fake a smile
but the question is how long can it keep while
smile when you wish
Be sad when you wish
the journey is yours
sing a song and make the goals yours
keep moving
keep raging
keep hustling
to the tunes of trials
Dance to the journey of success
it’s okay to take a rest….
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- Comment from author about the poem: Best of luck everyone, cause I know everyone will already do their best…so never bad to lean upon some luck and tuck in warm blanket
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Brilliant spiller ! Very nicely expressed . One of my favourite poems from you 🙂
Thanks dear Rose
The journey isn’t a bed of roses
It is only thorns and more thorns
But the caution is you can’t complaint
Cause it’s the road you chose at first place
So still awaiting the trophy of rose
It’s such an engaging read 🙂 truly great
Looking forward to lockdown and an excuse to stay in bed lol. We all need to pause and reflect and not push our selves so hard its not a race it is a gentle stroll taking time to enjoy the veiw. Love this piece. 💜
Thank you so much dear Wounded heart…so true ….now it’s time to activate the pause button
Take a rest indeed and raise the questions.... is the road you are upon really the road for you.... is there more to be gained of life's riches by travelling a different road?
That’s thought provoking and till the breathe is there it’s never too late to retrospect the decisions we took…rather than hitting and wounding ourselves
Thanks dear Dusk for your kind comments added to this poetry, it made this piece priceless
Very nice poem well expressed .
Thanks a lot dear Little dove
Dear Spiller !!
Sincerely I feel , passion when its at peak, the lonely journey is what matters.
REST , but don't RUST !!
Rest to Recharge, but don't Discharge
REST is a break between a great ending and a great beginning.
So Rest enough to Usher a New beginning !!!
Wow
Th indeed required catalyst
Your the angel dear Vamsi
Who acts to my core
Giving me booster when I fall
Thanks dear Vamsi
I shall rest but not rust
This time I shall not stop on my way
Very good and very true spilleronsheet but when you reach my age you can look back on your life and realise how well you have done to reach old age and have had a good life.
Andy
I will surely pay heed to your advice
I am always keen to learn more from you sir
And I look forward to those days when I can look happily at my past years
Thank you so much for your appreciation
It’s never easy. Inching forward bit by bit. Yes have a rest then on again. A wonderful message.
I am glad you liked it. Thanks a lot for your appreciation dear Rozina…
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