Chasing Light
He quite simply fell in love
with the way
she held her head like that
Tilted slightly
to one side, just listening ..
Much like
a sunflower might, intent
on nothing else
but chasing light ……………
And then,
standing tall on tippy toes
all of her
five foot, goodness knows ..
Perfect,
yet shy and waiting ………….
Oh’ so very
golden .. Sun kissed and sun
warmed ..
Well-oiled and burning bright
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments9
And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.
thanks for luring me back here Michael .. many thanks .. Hope you are well & had as good a Christmas as ever you could ... Here's to a better 2022 ............................... N
Lovely words Neville ))
thank you my friend .........thank you no end ............... and both kindly & true ...................... 🙂
(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.
aw shucks ....................................................... N 🙂
Romantic beautiful lines.
How kind you are Rozina & subsequently thanked bigly .................................... N 🙂
Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and to say I enjoyed this would be putting it mildly - -- a sigh of a read Nev........x
... you are indeed most kind Fay & my little scribble here is most grateful to you, as always ... x
Super words Neville, may she always be with you.
Andy
.... that'll do nicely sir ... thank you ..................................N 🙂
Should I meet her? Can I meet her?! heehee.
................ absolutely not under any circumstances, or for that matter, under anything .. N 🙂
Very nicely written.
thank you Draven ....................... 🙂
You are full of romance that your pen lovingly exposes, letting us dream a little
thanks for helping me to see further than the tip of my pen Suresh .......... you are far too kind & much appreciated .............................................................................. N
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