Raining In My Heart.

Goldfinch60



There I was on this fine December day

Two long years ago

The sun was out, the sky was blue.

I was with her,

Sitting by her side.

The love of my life just lying there,

Lying in a hospital bed.

Looking out there was not a cloud in the sky.

As I sat as she sucked her last breath,

That is when it started raining

Raining in my heart.

My lover had moved on

Moved on into that wonderful sky,

And beyond.

She will be there for me,

Always be there for me,

Just waiting for me.

And on that day the tears will stop,

And it will no longer be

Raining in my heart.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 30th, 2021 01:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: Two years ago today, 30th December, my wife passed from this world. She is now waiting for me.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 72
  • Users favorite of this poem: spilleronsheet, Vamsi Sudha, Accidental Poet.
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Comments10

  • Rozina

    This is very sad. I am sorry to hear of your loss.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Rozina, much appreciated.

      Andy

    • Michael Edwards

      I well remember you parting with the sad news - a poem written with such feeling - may she rest in peace.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Michael, much appreciated.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        A poignant write Gold.
        Time went slowly then, maybe. Then fast perhaps - two years already.

        • Goldfinch60

          Very true Orchi, thank you.

          Andy

        • spilleronsheet

          Very emotional write dear Andy
          I always wonder how she was
          And then through your poetry i can actually feel the presence of her
          She was a lovely lady
          And your love is eternal
          One day you shall reunite again
          But for now mps shall stall you for sometime to hear the wonderful tales and experiences of your life
          Felt teary after reading this poetry
          But could feel true love

          • Goldfinch60

            You are most kind spilleronsheet, yes that love was there all our married life and still continues and will still be there when we are back together.

            Andy

          • Vamsi Sudha

            Gold , that was really really heart wrenching to read. Tough moments to part from our loved one.
            But yes, we have memories to cherish the time spent with her. Those are a treasure and a booster dose to move ahead in such situations. Well written and really touching !!

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you VS, yes those memories will always be with me.

              Andy

            • Neville



              I remember that day my golden friend .. and my thoughts are with you today sir

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

                Andy

              • dusk arising

                It's with great courage you soldier on bolstered by your beliefs and strongly held faith. Giving so generously of yourself. You are indeed a remarkable human being and we are lucky to be blessed with your words and attention here on mps.... soincerely meant.

                • Goldfinch60

                  You are most kind d a, and I very much appreciated your words.

                  Andy

                • Accidental Poet

                  She may not be here physically, but she'll always be with you spiritually. And your words that you pen for her always make her smile. 🌹😊

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very true AP, she is always with me.

                    Andy

                    • Accidental Poet

                      As will be my dad. 😉

                    • SureshG

                      She wants you to gather a few more stories to share for when you are together again, as you do with us of your memories

                      • Goldfinch60

                        She surely does Suresh. Thank you for your kind words.

                        Andy

                      • Trenz Pruca

                        I am so very sorry for your loss. Your poem is a beautiful memory.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you Trenz, much appreciated.

                          Andy



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