I don't wish to struggle and need the strut back in my walk
It's not that I can't climb mountains but something has to move
I could smash it all atoms or cry a monsoon to cover it up
Truth is the only solution although we never agree to much....
So me myself and I sit down with spirit to write poetry
To become the one in the middle seeing life is just a dream
Living was never ment to be an option or priced out of reach
It's the miracle of being part of creativity standing on two feet
Passing the spark memories to keep the fire lit
Finding balance within the darkness and returning home with it
This year of 2022 I'll try not fix the world but just complete myself
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Having a wobble as I still follow my dream to be one with nature and find harmony....hopefully to keep earning some money as the cost of living becomes more than words can bring.... maybe one day we can all win the lottery, wait we did! It's the air we breathe... Still trying to find the truth in me...
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Great writing , Dan 🙂 finding balance within is important and finding ourselves .
Good morning my friend and glad you agree as it's easy to write but not put it into action! With super support like yours I'm sure I'll get there lol
Have a splendid day
You'll never complete yourself my friend, none of us do..... the grim reaper can finish us, but we're never complete.
That's just the way of it .... compromise is key... i.e. coming to terms with our failings and not beating ourselves up over them... we are humans, there never was a perfect human (except me of course).
I'll be honest my friend (as always) I found myself taking a late night dog walk last night and felt your words and asked myself to let go of not being perfect and the harm I caused with no excuse of what happened to me!
My choices were made and I wish to except and truly let go to move forward....
Thank you! You perfectly imperfect human!
Sometimes it's also difficult to put into words but you've done it - may 2022 bring all that you hope for.
Yes may tears came before the words and your hope will give me air underneath my wings!
Happy new year good sir and may it be pleasant one for you and yours
Good words Dan, you have come a long way in your life and I am sure you will complete yourself into the person that you wish to become in a very short time.
Andy
As always Andy you seal the deal and help keep this motivation keep burning in me!
Happy new year my friend
Thank you for all the years of support
A positive zeal is the required ingredient
Imperfect souls born yet striving our best is our need
And lets hustle bustle till we can
Cause only corpses can’t move in lanes
Great one dear poet
Let's hustle and bustle till we can, cause only corpses can't move lanes! That actually made me laugh out loud, then sat with my soul!
Spent most of my life in the fast lane not sure how to go slow...
Pure gold of inspiration that I think will be my next bit of dribble
Happy new year too 😉
Well that makes me smile and a bit proud… i hope I don’t fall due to the push of ego you gave me….thanks dear Dan for such a beautiful poetry
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