π en were her obsession
π very wink was a pleasure
π eeling them in like a
π ighty fisherman with bait
π stounding was her voice
π ncredible was her beauty
π eadly was her lure
π ighty Sailors fell prey
π ach time she sang
π eaching out with dulce tones the
π ermaid was the bait
π nd out jumped a shark
π nto the mighy air
π evouring the Sailor
π aybe that was her destiny
π ach Sailor broke her heart
π ealizing she had been cursed
π aybe if she had human legs
π t least she could've been loved
π nstead she was the bait for the
π eadly Demon Shark
π ermaids have a heart
π ach one is unique
π omance lives in their soul
π aybe if they weren't cursed
π nd they had human legs
π ncredible love they would feel
π esired instead of feared
- Author: Dove (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 3rd, 2022 07:50
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments6
I was hooked from the off ... Never seen a quadruple acrostic before .. plenty of mermaids for sure, but never a whole shoal of em like these .... N π
Thanks I appreciate The read! ππ
M esmerised
E nriched
R elated
M eaningfully
A ttached
I nstantly
D evoted
It's all in the swish of your mermaid's tail.
Very creative reply! Its all in the Tale! Indeed
Swishing along
Your mermaid has much appeal Dove and a deal of pity as well - a super read and clever multi-acrostic
Thanks dearest Fay! Glad you enjoyed the Acrostic Tale!! Thanks for stopping by
Such a beautiful multi-acrostic
My mind kept playing βthe little mermaidβ very engaging tale you wrote with your pen
Thanks, when I think of mermaids! The Disney Picture of Ariel does come alive!
Thanks for stopping by
Exactly
Thatβs what i felt
Wow this is very interesting. I've learnt something new about poetry writing styles. Thank you.
Glad you learned a new poetic format!
I am a structural poet! I like trying different forms! Sonnets are my favorite
Wonderful acrostic(s) Dove.
Andy
Thanks Andy! Happy New Year!
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