It's not that I know tones of science behind all of this
I find it more about a soul you've decided to share your life with
That doesn't talk our mother tongue but another many have forgot
This authentic body language of truth and respect
Laying down the foundations to build the trust
There is no guru just slips of information along the way
This was never my intended purpose but then I'm not sure whatever was!
All I know is life gave me lessons to face what's deep in my soul
Everything I do that stops me becoming all that I want
Seeing that all may not be perfect but passing every goal I set
The only thing to hold me back was blamed on regrets
Until nature came and saw what was underneath to let it all go again
Breathe in deep and close your eyes to know we are the same
Each one of us is a creator who holds a naked flame
Fuelled by the inner magic to bring comfort to a name
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Trying to keep my passion burn bright as this Saturday I have two misbehaving xl bulldogs come for an assessment. So I've written it out and as always I stop when I feel fulfilled and last few lines sealed the deal. Keep up the write and finding your own real, never ignore the things you feel...also trying on videos but it really takes to much time but I do love the picture lol
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Very encouraging write
Good going dear poetic Dan
Always appreciated my friend
Keep writing Dan - you have an accomplished pen and here's to more in the coming year.
It does feel so and hope to keep up my flow but no matter what I'm sure there be more to come!
Always appreciated
That magic has become part of you Dan and you are moving into a wonderful place in your life, and may it always be so.
Andy
I wish it stayed this morning lol but I'm sure it will be back.
Thank you my friend
I especially love the last two lines , Dan )
It doesn’t always feel that way tho , that we can create because we feel we can .
I know I can certainly have times where I feel I can’t get to what I want .. and I don’t feel that sense of inner empowerment and strength .
You are so right my friend and but if we create good then we have to create the bad too!
Or maybe just like the weather it can't be sunny or rain all the time...
Think this may be my next rhyme lol
Always appreciated
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