Comfort in a name

Poetic Dan



It's not that I know tones of science behind all of this 

 

I find it more about a soul you've decided to share your life with 

 

That doesn't talk our mother tongue but another many have forgot 

 

This authentic body language of truth and respect 

 

Laying down the foundations to build the trust 

 

There is no guru just slips of information along the way 

 

This was never my intended purpose but then I'm not sure whatever was! 

 

All I know is life gave me lessons to face what's deep in my soul 

 

Everything I do that stops me becoming all that I want 

 

Seeing that all may not be perfect but  passing every goal I set 

 

The only thing to hold me back was blamed on regrets 

 

Until nature came and saw what was underneath to let it all go again 

 

Breathe in deep and close your eyes to know we are the same 

 

Each one of us is a creator who holds a naked flame 

 

Fuelled by the inner magic to bring comfort to a name

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 5th, 2022 09:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: Trying to keep my passion burn bright as this Saturday I have two misbehaving xl bulldogs come for an assessment. So I've written it out and as always I stop when I feel fulfilled and last few lines sealed the deal. Keep up the write and finding your own real, never ignore the things you feel...also trying on videos but it really takes to much time but I do love the picture lol
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  • spilleronsheet

    Very encouraging write
    Good going dear poetic Dan

    • Poetic Dan

      Always appreciated my friend

    • Michael Edwards

      Keep writing Dan - you have an accomplished pen and here's to more in the coming year.

      • Poetic Dan

        It does feel so and hope to keep up my flow but no matter what I'm sure there be more to come!

        Always appreciated

      • Goldfinch60

        That magic has become part of you Dan and you are moving into a wonderful place in your life, and may it always be so.

        Andy

        • Poetic Dan

          I wish it stayed this morning lol but I'm sure it will be back.
          Thank you my friend

        • Caring dove

          I especially love the last two lines , Dan )


          It doesn’t always feel that way tho , that we can create because we feel we can .

          I know I can certainly have times where I feel I can’t get to what I want .. and I don’t feel that sense of inner empowerment and strength .

          • Poetic Dan

            You are so right my friend and but if we create good then we have to create the bad too!
            Or maybe just like the weather it can't be sunny or rain all the time...

            Think this may be my next rhyme lol

            Always appreciated



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