The sun was out with even a little warmth, so off we trotted for a beaching walk.
A little slice of things to come, days that last and nights not so long
Appreciation may not come all at once, just a trickle can be enough
To keep us grounded and holding on, until waterfalls cascade into love
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just saying what I see to keep being me!
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Beautiful last line , ‘ waterfalls cascade into love ‘
Nice writing 🙂
I can often cry to let go of my anger to find that love...
It took a while to change my mood but as always it did in the end..
Always appreciate your time
A beautiful scene and wonderful complementing lines
The last lines were so appeasing to eyes
As always my friend you bring a smile to see your name
Have yourself a fantastic day
May the trickle continue into loves lagoons.
Nothing like a gentle lagoon, perfectly said so I'm sure it will
Brilliant write, that family love is so wonderful in you all Dan.
Andy
That I'm sure you know well my friend, always appreciated.
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