Comments I see

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  Michael Edwards January 14th, 2022 01:28

  Absolutely love this - so original in concept and a great read - you're a true poet.

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  FallenAngel1🕊 January 14th, 2022 01:42

  Thank you so much Michael. That really means a lot coming from such a talent as yourself. Much appreciation😀

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  Goldfinch60 January 14th, 2022 01:53

  Good honest words fallenAngel that come from the heart.
  
  Andy

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    FallenAngel1🕊January 14th, 2022 02:17

    Thank you Goldfinch 😀

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  spilleronsheet January 14th, 2022 02:13

  A poet is born cause he speaks from heart
  Those elegance and refine isn’t a true poet inside
  Cause the true words come straight from inside
  Dwelling in reader’s mind

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  FallenAngel1🕊 January 14th, 2022 02:29

  Thanks spiller😀

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  orchidee January 14th, 2022 03:07

  Good write Angel. Maybe you've invented a new word, though spell-checker does not like it!
  The only words you gotta worry about is the ones that I sing, cos I torture everyone by singing 'em! heehee.

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    FallenAngel1🕊January 14th, 2022 08:33

    Thanks orchi,remind me not to introduce you to my 2 year old grandniece,between your singing voice and her lungs,together you'd cause the earth to quake and heaven to shake,then all ears would be baked😄✌️🕊

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  Rozina January 14th, 2022 03:42

  This is such a clever poem. It is very original, your own. From MPS I have seen poems that flow so beautifully but some I don't understand too. The meaning is very deep. I can only do rhyming ones with simple direct words. Still learning. Thank you for sharing this.

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    FallenAngel1🕊January 14th, 2022 08:23

    Thanks you Rozina,good to know I'm not the only one😀🌹

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  dusk arising January 14th, 2022 05:12

  Us poets do what comes naturally. We express ourselves using a thing called communication. Communication for others to see and so that we can at a later date see what we wrote. Typos and spelling errors we see plenty but who cares really? So long as the meter hasn't been shot in the foot or the grammar is really bad or worse still its in a foreign language.. who cares. It's thoughts we are transmitting.... expressions of our feelings

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    FallenAngel1🕊January 14th, 2022 08:36

    Thanks for these assuring words dusk😀

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  woundedheart January 14th, 2022 05:19

  Three dots mean pause between lines, you pen as eloquently as anyone here your poetry is always beautiful. ☺

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    FallenAngel1🕊January 14th, 2022 08:39

    Aw Wh that's so kind of you,much appreciated😊✌️🕊

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  L. B. Mek January 14th, 2022 06:05

  the true test of poetry
  is not in its wording or form-fitting
  or rather, even its championing
  of eloquence..
  the true test of poetry
  is in its capacity to convey sincerity
  and that, dear Poet
  is what you've done here
  so brilliantly! thank you
  for choosing to share
  (I read and learn, humbly)

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    FallenAngel1🕊January 14th, 2022 08:52

    Thanks you so much L.B. It was reading comments,sometimes quite long such as some of yours and others that inspired this little gem of mine. Look at that,even through our comments influence flows among us. Who'd have thought. So thank you once again🌟😀✌🕊

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  Laura🌻 January 14th, 2022 20:24

  fallenAngel1🕊,
  
  • “Comments I See”
  When I saw the title of your poem, it intrigued me. I had to read it! When I finished reading it, the first comment I saw was from Michael. I TOTALLY agree with his comment and all the others. We all have our styles and we write when we’re inspired or whenever we wish to. We learn from one another…including from the dictionary by your side. I still have and sometimes refer to my original dictionary I used when I was learning the English language.
  
  Thank you for sharing your thoughts .👍🏻😄
  
  Laura🌻
  

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    FallenAngel1🕊January 14th, 2022 21:13

    Thanks Laura🌻 Funny thing is,as I was typing it out in my notes on my I pad,I noticed a line pop up under that word,and just decided to run with it lol,😜 Thanks again Laura🌻🤗✌🕊

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    Laura🌻January 14th, 2022 21:47

    👏🏻 👍🏻♥️