Resupine, lifeless
in pewter waters
drifting
slowly drifting
onward
to a torrid sea
never to return
never to breathe
onward
into oblivion.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: January 31st, 2022 02:35
- Comment from author about the poem: Started out as a contribution to a Fusion poem - altered a bit and here in its own right.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 28
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
Comments4
Such sad words Michael but brilliantly written.
Great drawing that fits in so well with your words.
Andy
Good write and pic M.
Them syllables gone into oblivion? Miss Berles nowhere to be seen?!
She's gone Dissapeara Berles.
well I for one am delighted you posted 'LAST SEEN' here & in its present format .. tis exceedingly good sir .... N
You are a gent dear friend.
I enjoyed these few lines and as always admire your drawing.
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