A Fading Star

Rocky Lagou

Like the sun foreshadowing a terror

With every shot from its coronal loops

 

I too get uneasy when I’m bitter

 

Like Venus, planet of love and

Abundant light

 

I too can be showy – but obviously tawdry

 

Like the moon who’s only doing is to

Circuit through a course with no end

 

I too am used.

 

But the only one who I am ever truly reminiscent of

Is a fading star

With its growth from the nursery (stellar nebula)

to zenith (a star)

It is at its peak

But when the fuel of life begins to seep – BOOM! (Planetary nebula)

It is only as vigorous as it was when it

wasn’t even born

 

lifeless – I too.

  • Author: Rocky Lagou (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 1st, 2022 14:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: Feel free to give feedback. My first poem.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • spilleronsheet

    A very unique write
    Could feel travelling the starry night
    A good usage of imagery
    I visited the planetary
    A very dear topic of my heart
    Welcome to MPS dear poet
    Thanks for sharing
    And keep penning

    • Rocky Lagou

      Omg I could literally cry πŸ˜„ - my first comment! Thanks so much. I literally have a book of poetry to publish waiting in a Word doc and then I came across this website while looking up places to publish some of my poetry and it's limited to one per day πŸ’”. But as they say, "patience is a virtue."

      • spilleronsheet

        Surely that’s the rule but it’s a good one
        So that everyone can have say
        Happy posting as you stay

      • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

        This is such a cool piece Rocky. And that one a day rule has a loophole. Just post 2 poems in one shot. I did once. I called it "2 4 1 deal/a loophole" I think it's on page 5 of all my poems. Cheers🍻

        • Rocky Lagou

          Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, I wrote it over a year ago and was the first poem I've ever written. I may try that recommendation as well, a "two in one" sounds interesting. Stay safe! πŸŒŸπŸ‘

        • Poetic Dan

          Wow what a trip I'll be sure to pop back for more!

          Keep up the write
          Much peace and respect

          • Rocky Lagou

            Thanks so much Dan! I'm glad you enjoyed this fond poem of mine! Can't wait to see more from you! πŸ˜‰πŸ’–

          • junia

            I really like your style of writing, the single lines and that you add words in paranthesis. It gives your work a unique touch and, in a way, creates more room for interpretation even though or maybe because it gives the reader something new to hold onto.

            • Rocky Lagou

              Thank you so much Junia! I'm actually low-key ecstatic right now after finally having someone appreciate the syntax and format of my poems. I'm glad that you took it into consideration when reading this beloved poem of mine. I try to create art that is not only interesting but also multifaceted. Thanks for the love! πŸ’–πŸ˜Š



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