Where it emerged
was a dab
from a fully loaded cartridge
living in the family of inks
the pen
the mightiest sword
stored the talents of history
Contributing and creating galore of praises
sudden
a rebel
the blot fell
not being like other in crew
maybe it was born screw
the blot
a rebel
wanted to create a new show
for all to bow
it can’t sing the parody
Was it a tragedy ?
spilling through the stylus that hold
while everyone in clan of ink scold
none, understand its cold
Manipulated
commanded
criticised
and abandoned
was the lonely blot on score
it wanted to created a song
it wanted to write a story,that’s long
it wanted to venture the world
to see what beauty it held
the blot decided to be free
to write songs at spree
it shall create a history of its own
which none of the inks could do, on their own
the blot
spilled on the sheet
to be a dandelion on street…..
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spilleronsheet (
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The pen is mightier than the sword... so goes the wise old saying but alas they seem to have missed out the most important finishing flourish "in the right hand".
That’s a remarkable quote
Flourish in the right hand….true it is…its a pen that can write poetries as may it can write death sentences…..you awakened my muse….alas today’s already penned…so if i still remember tomorrow i shall give wind to my thoughts….
The man with the gun is truly powerful.
The man with the pen will take your life.
Such an amazing little device, especially when you sign without checking the small print.
The terms and conditions
What a beautiful observation dear Paul
This poetry requires a sequel because of the greatest artists giving it score so that it can be better and deeper insights
Wow !! that was a great ending
"the blot
spilled on the sheet
to be a dandelion on street….."
Let the thoughts be set free and have their way !! And ofcourse a blot on the sheets , can create such wonderful poems, like yours.....thanks spiller, U did spill well today 🙂
Thank you so much dear Vamsi
It was really joyful to go through your review
Much appreciated
Well yes, the blot is surely taking a lesson from me
Clumsily spilling on sheet
Talk about metapoetry, this right there was lovely. Bravo!👍
Thanks a lot dear reader
Much appreciated
Good write S.
Thanks a lot Orchi….
A joy to read these lines.
Thanks dear Rozina
I really loved reading this spilleronsheet, a very interesting concept, which has been excellently delivered.
May the blot write a song, for all to be proud of!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
Thanks a lot dear AuburnScribbler
Glad you liked it
Yes it shall surely write a song or a story which is long
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