Midst of summer
spring
autumn or winter
presence was around
but never missed
alas
who knew
absence
created a hole
a habit of missing
and finding presence in unobvious things
like a star
natural it may
but what if one day they vanish away ?
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They may well vanish but in life there will always be something to replace them and bring your life to fulfilment once again.
Andy
Yes
Looking above those lines
Maybe someone shall replace those fading memories inside
Thanks dear Andy for showing sunshine
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a backdrop to our selfish lives. Then one day we realise and cherish.
If those stars were taken away i should surely miss them, but if they were never there then there are plenty of other wonders all around us so capable of filling us with awe.
Very true
Beauty is there in variety
Often we are ignorant too realise
Fixated by only one kind
Until alas there is end of life
Yes true. Some are replaceable, but some are not. Enjoy the moments as long as we can see, move, breathe!
So true dear Rozina
Enjoy and love every moment till one can breathe
'then look upon them
every opportunity you get
encase them in that carbon, memory
of your life's, mementos and worry
no more...!'
(a wonderful shorty
thanks for the read, dear poet)
A beautiful poetry in reply and such a gentle advice
Yes they are treasured in the heart inside
Always inside
Never abandoning the mind
Those were the real moments of life
They are today as well
But in somewhere else
Wonder if they remember us when seeing unobvious things around
Like stars visible here
Are they remembrance to them as well
"It's a song that we were born to sing, about the end of everything" 💖👍 Lovely poem.
Thanks dear reader and what a beautiful reply
Much appreciated
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