Timed.
Far away on first-fringed beams of morning
rides Ol' Sol's wild horses,
rays of white light
moving in sequence saddle silence
for Venus as gifts pour from her paramour Night.
Stars gather for dark's dismissal, restored
to spacious vaults pale more
as they wait 'til sanctified
by call for ascension where sighted
they can display next cavalcade's candled fire.
Desire for his Lady of changeable form
sees Knight's won glory
now timed to break, rising
when victorious Dawn realizes
with Venus unveiled new morning can smile.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: February 10th, 2022 04:17
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'rides Ol' Sol's wild horses,
rays of white light
moving in sequence saddle silence'..
what Sublime wording of yearning
one of your very best poems!
and that's not said, lightly
trust me..
I thank you! for choosing to share
your transcendent poetic talent
with the utmost sincerity, dear Fay
Thrilling to think you consider this as one of my best efforts at nature poetry dear L.B. - - - so so pleased you found pleasure in reading of Ol Sol's wild affair with Daylight.
Delightful poetry. A similar subject for my humble offering today also.
The dawning is always different and there are so many ways to consider it and to address it. Something quite beautiful which you write of with a real appreciation of it's splendour - showing us new ways to look heavenward.
What a delightful comment my dear friend - - you phrase your reviews so beautifully helpful and also full of encouragement - thank you more so because at the moment I am having to curtail some of my time spent writing and posting.
That saddens me Fay because your fine posts are so well read and appreciated here, certainly I never overlook your poetry when I am online lest I miss the delight therein. I know you'll be missed and I humbly suggest that if composition time is hard to find then show us some gems from the past which you would place before our appreciative eyes.
Good write Fay.
Thanking you muchly dear Orchi.
Just read dusks SOL and now this - a double bonus day to be sure
Yes - strange how poetic minds can think alike sometimes Mike. - - Dusk's posting I thought so moving and am now on my way to seek your own offering today my clever friend.
“Desire for his Lady of changeable form
sees Knight's won glory
now timed to break, rising
when victorious Dawn realizes
with Venus unveiled new morning can smile.”
A majestic poetry displaying the sun, q celestial being caught in my eyes
How well you wedded the imagery with the sunrise
A beautiful poetry transcends across the time
Catching the space in readers’ ‘mind
Sunrise and sunset are beautiful
But they turned more after going through your piece
Marvellous dear Fay
Well penned
Nature at its best. Magnificent.
Wonderful words Fay, each new dawning is so wonderful to see and to arise in.
Andy
poetry personified if you dont mind me saying .. or as we say round here Gert lush ma'am ................ Neville x
dear nev -- what a massive compliment and I mind not in the slightest she types as she blushes cos she likes it a lot - - as for being gert lush - well that be reet cornish i'd av u know amigo -- -- hey not bad for one handed eh ?...........................x
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