Parasol

Rocky Lagou

When

everything else is against me,

May   you   please   cover   the   rays   of   hate?

I’ve    been    a    wandering    soul    for    much    too    long,

I   need   your   body   to   lay   on,   to    sponge   up   my   tears.

Be    the    sunshade    that    can    reflect    the    outer    chaos    and

return    it    to    me    as    a    light    for    my    worn-out    parched    soul.

Can

You

Be

The

One

Who

Can

Save

 Me?

Can

You

Parasol? Be                 

 My

  • Author: Rocky Lagou (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 10th, 2022 10:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem reflects on the hard times we all face in life. It focuses on that person that, despite the "outer chaos," can make us feel reassured that it will all pass. Its that one person that will endlessly love us; it's our "parasol."
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 52
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  • Rozina

    I enjoyed this poem. It's lovely.

    • Rocky Lagou

      Thanks so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! Continue being amazing! 👍☀🌟

    • Goldfinch60

      very good words and layout Rocky.

      Andy

      • Rocky Lagou

        Hey! Thanks for the feedback Andy! I'm pleased that you were able to stop by and read my poem. Also, about the layout, it's supposed to be in the shape of a parasol. I wanted to get creative with the piece so I'm glad you noted that. Have a good day! ☂😄💖

      • spilleronsheet

        A beautiful yearning every soul longs
        A shade of tree in one’s difficulties
        A helping hand in storms
        And a gentle breeze to calm
        That’s the parasol for me….
        What a beautiful emotion you inked
        A man’s simple desire, not greed
        Only if tears fell one could dry them
        Very well inked dear poet….

        • Rocky Lagou

          Thanks so much Spiller for this lovely comment! All we need sometimes is that person that will willingly comfort us during tough times. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. 👍

        • Garth Rakumakoe

          I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, this write... Artistic in conception, craft, and presentation... Well done dear writer!

          • Rocky Lagou

            Wow! I love this enthusiastic comment! Thanks so much Garth! I'm really glad to hear that you LOVED this poem. Also thanks for taking into consideration the presentation of it; I wanted to get a little out of the "boxy" quatrains. Stay safe! 👍💖🌟

          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

            Wow an artistic creative poem, appealing and i liked the fine structure. Kudos!

            Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

            And
            Happy valentines day, poets.

            • Rocky Lagou

              Thank you very much for the comment! HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! I'm glad that I was able to pique your interest. Also, I will make sure to check your poem! 💖💖

            • Bella Shepard

              The greatest gift in the world is to know that you are loved unconditionally. Beautifully said in this poem. Thank You!

              • Rocky Lagou

                Thanks so much Bella! I really appreciate your kind words! Love is vital for survival in this hectic world. You are loved! 💖



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