A delicious languor steals over one
in the languid twilight falling over the meadow,
Watching tiny animated spectrums
whirring in the after-glow
Flitting among pretty petals
the gossamer-winged dragon-flies or mayflies
Fluttering among delicate filaments
the fine and flimsy butterflies.
Then also retire to admire
exquisite darting damsel_flies.
All in all some of nature's soothing balms.
Created by God Himself, Nature calms.
Divine holistic bonuses for relaxation...
Look for getaways, away from
city/town noise pollution.
A lavender sprinkled jacuzzi,
rose petals and jasmines floating about
like imitation lotus on ponds
right in your bubbly scented bubble-bath
As ambient soft gleams of moon beams
seep in through translucent glass.
Luxuriate in the ephemeral, inhale in the aromatic
incenses of perfumery, oils and essential oils
Bathe in breathtaking spa joys euphoric
listening to choirs of cicada music
Relax and unwind in the famed Turkish Bath
wherein to indulge yourself in steamy massage
Complete with the charm of the exotic
even if you don't live in Turkey or aren't Turkish.
Nature and such baths all God created or inspired,
and thus very very therapeutic...
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Author:
S.zaynab.M.V.Kamoonpury (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Nature
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Comments14
Very pretty description of nature. Really enjoyed this poem.
Warmest thanx dear for lovely comment, 🌷
Great poem
Hi dear, warm thanks for the cool comment, 🌷
wonderful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
Thanks for enjoying nature with me, fine poetic heart! Cheers!
Good write z.
Thanks so much for the nice comment orchidee.
Good write, S.Z. A fine read.
Thanks soo much for enjoying the nature in this. Have a good day poet!
Lovely poem! The descriptions are so vivid and real. I feel as though I am in this paradise, bathing with the sounds of Mother Nature. Beautifully written. 💖👍
Yayy that was my intent, to transport to nature paradise for virtual relaxation. Thanks soo much for super comment.🌿🦋
There is a great sense of quietude interwoven into your eloquent poem that has flowed very smoothly emphasising and converting the deep inherent serenity that lies deep into the heart of nature when we can find great solace once we can understand God's glorious voice amid His very expressive creation and attain the ultimate peace for our souls. Thank you really for sharing this magnificent and very deep poem.
Aw thanks soo much for such a nice eloquent comment fine poet! God bless and best wishes,
Very beautiful, well written, I can imagine relaxing with my husband Dion,in this place you so well describe.
Im glad i could transport you to nature with poetry, i guess we all can do that with each other. Warmest thanks for lovely comment, yeahh enjoy with luv. 🌷👍🏻
Beautiful imagery embraces the lovely nature….so vivid…well penned dear poet…
Warmest thanks for the super comment enjoying nature with me .🦋🌷Take care poetess,
Beautiful words, living with nature is sublime.
Andy
Thanks soo much for comment fine poet Goldfinch🐦🐥. Cheers,
A very vividly descriptive piece. It paint quite a clear picture. Well written.
Thanks so much for the feedback,
I leave this page with my head filled with colours & the gentle & relaxing therapeutic hum of a hundred different brightly hued flying creatures .. very much enjoyed ................................... N
Yeahh hope it relaxed as well, thanks so much for super comment,
Too long
Hmm, this isn't even long. I have read longer poems by others.
Enjoyed
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