It can be fun!

Poetic Dan

The cat sat under the moon, as the seagull  flew off to soon

A mouse grabbed the crumbs and ran but hedgehog made different plans

While the fox stayed slightly on track, forgot to check for the moles hidden trap

Above the magpies squcked real hard, unable to hear the squirrels say charge

As the horse found it to much not to neigh, making the sheep flock away in dismayyyy.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 14th, 2022 12:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: There see, not all just emotional baggage too let go off. Rhymes can be random fun!
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  • Caring dove

    And great writing ! 🙂 I hardly ever rhyme in my poems .. maybe I should try one day

    Hope your feeling ok tiday

    • Poetic Dan

      It was playing with little one on the first line and I just couldn't help carry it on...

      Things are what they are but I'm grateful for a lot less pain...

      Always appreciate your time

    • Rocky Lagou

      OK, apart from me finding the first line ironic when linking it to the image above. "A dog under the sun" This was witty and fun. Rhyming is such a joyful tool. 👏

      • Poetic Dan

        Well it was today's sunset if that counts but I did think that before choosing but life can most definitely be a little ironic... don't you think lol

        Glady you enjoyed and really appreciate your time, it also is a favourite tool of mine!

      • Crowns4Christ

        This is so cute Dan

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you kindly it was done for my 2 year old...

        • Rozina

          I like your rhyming poem. It was fun to read.

          • Poetic Dan

            It definitely felt good to write, always appreciated.
            Thank you

          • spilleronsheet

            A fun read
            Took me on a trail of walking carefree
            Watching them play
            Great rhyme dear poetic Dan, cause I hardly rhyme…..

            • Poetic Dan

              Glad you enjoyed the stroll, I'll try to keep them happy to lighten my load!
              Thanks for the inspiration of more rhyming gold...

              Lol great way to start the morning.
              Thank you my friend

            • Goldfinch60

              Good fun words Dan.

              Andy

              • Poetic Dan

                Cheers Andy!



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