The cat sat under the moon, as the seagull flew off to soon
A mouse grabbed the crumbs and ran but hedgehog made different plans
While the fox stayed slightly on track, forgot to check for the moles hidden trap
Above the magpies squcked real hard, unable to hear the squirrels say charge
As the horse found it to much not to neigh, making the sheep flock away in dismayyyy.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: There see, not all just emotional baggage too let go off. Rhymes can be random fun!
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And great writing ! 🙂 I hardly ever rhyme in my poems .. maybe I should try one day
Hope your feeling ok tiday
It was playing with little one on the first line and I just couldn't help carry it on...
Things are what they are but I'm grateful for a lot less pain...
Always appreciate your time
OK, apart from me finding the first line ironic when linking it to the image above. "A dog under the sun" This was witty and fun. Rhyming is such a joyful tool. 👏
Well it was today's sunset if that counts but I did think that before choosing but life can most definitely be a little ironic... don't you think lol
Glady you enjoyed and really appreciate your time, it also is a favourite tool of mine!
This is so cute Dan
Thank you kindly it was done for my 2 year old...
I like your rhyming poem. It was fun to read.
It definitely felt good to write, always appreciated.
Thank you
A fun read
Took me on a trail of walking carefree
Watching them play
Great rhyme dear poetic Dan, cause I hardly rhyme…..
Glad you enjoyed the stroll, I'll try to keep them happy to lighten my load!
Thanks for the inspiration of more rhyming gold...
Lol great way to start the morning.
Thank you my friend
Good fun words Dan.
Andy
Cheers Andy!
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