Adventuring on

Poetic Dan

I'll keep the rhymes up to lighten my load, to enjoy happiness on a stroll

As the dog strutted in morning the sun, the crabs made bets on everyone

With one eye from the fish's, all the shells became treasured beaches

Yet just across the road all the swans bathed in rays of gold

Never to underestimate the magic of tadpoles turning old

For the badgers just wish everyone would stop making all the noise

As we're all waiting for our time to go adventuring in this world.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2022 03:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: One for the road before I get to old and a great way to start the day! Appreciate the inspiration, keep up the write...
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  • Views: 29
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Laura🌻
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  • Caring dove

    Great writing , Dan ! 🙂 I love this ..

    • Poetic Dan

      Got to try my friend and always thankful for your time!

    • L. B. Mek

      (when I so your name
      a smile as wide as my screen
      glued itself to my face,
      when I read your words
      a drop of solace, as weighty
      as my love for poetry
      settled itself within me..)
      from one 'tadpole'
      (awaiting those promised adventures)
      to a true Poet
      who shines bright and shows us
      how to make everyday an adventure,
      I thank you, brother
      for your words of impassioned resolve and hope!
      a great write, my friend

      • Poetic Dan

        I've read your words 3 times and now glued them to my heart for nobody but a true soulful poet knows how to keep the light on in the dark....

        The unknowingly smile I created has been returned to feel my wrinkles brake, followed by laughter that my whole body embraced!

        Always inspiring pleasure to see your name

        Have a fantastic day

        Lol

      • spilleronsheet

        An epic tale
        Another fantasy
        Another journey
        Giving positive vibes
        Welcoming the spring in its blooming time
        Well crafted dear Poetic Dan

        • Poetic Dan

          Blooming loved this and actually help start my day at 5:30am
          Thank you my friend

        • Goldfinch60

          Good words Dan, just keep on adventuring in your life.

          Andy

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you my main man, may your adventures be filled with bliss!

          • Rocky Lagou

            Wanderlust encapsulated in one beautiful poem. As a gypsy myself I felt this poem! 👏❣

            • Poetic Dan

              Your kind words are well appreciated and glad to know another wondering soul..

            • Laura🌻

              Dan,

              ‘As we're all waiting for our time to go adventuring in this world.’

              Ah…such prophetic words are making me wonder and think of this new unforeseen adventure of mine which has begun. Always a pleasure to read your work.

              Thank you for sharing.

              Laura🌻



              • Poetic Dan

                Unforseen sound like an incredibly wonderful adventure and one in sure a delightful soul as you deserves.

                Always appreciate your time my friend

                • Laura🌻

                  Doing my best to give you as much time as I can because I do enjoy reading your poems and the videos you post.☺️

                • Rozina

                  Great adventure, enjoying nature. Lovely lines indeed.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Thank you my friend, just doing what we do to stay positive.

                    Always appreciated



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