I'll keep the rhymes up to lighten my load, to enjoy happiness on a stroll
As the dog strutted in morning the sun, the crabs made bets on everyone
With one eye from the fish's, all the shells became treasured beaches
Yet just across the road all the swans bathed in rays of gold
Never to underestimate the magic of tadpoles turning old
For the badgers just wish everyone would stop making all the noise
As we're all waiting for our time to go adventuring in this world.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: One for the road before I get to old and a great way to start the day! Appreciate the inspiration, keep up the write...
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- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Laura🌻.
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Great writing , Dan ! 🙂 I love this ..
Got to try my friend and always thankful for your time!
(when I so your name
a smile as wide as my screen
glued itself to my face,
when I read your words
a drop of solace, as weighty
as my love for poetry
settled itself within me..)
from one 'tadpole'
(awaiting those promised adventures)
to a true Poet
who shines bright and shows us
how to make everyday an adventure,
I thank you, brother
for your words of impassioned resolve and hope!
a great write, my friend
I've read your words 3 times and now glued them to my heart for nobody but a true soulful poet knows how to keep the light on in the dark....
The unknowingly smile I created has been returned to feel my wrinkles brake, followed by laughter that my whole body embraced!
Always inspiring pleasure to see your name
Have a fantastic day
Lol
An epic tale
Another fantasy
Another journey
Giving positive vibes
Welcoming the spring in its blooming time
Well crafted dear Poetic Dan
Blooming loved this and actually help start my day at 5:30am
Thank you my friend
Good words Dan, just keep on adventuring in your life.
Andy
Thank you my main man, may your adventures be filled with bliss!
Wanderlust encapsulated in one beautiful poem. As a gypsy myself I felt this poem! 👏❣
Your kind words are well appreciated and glad to know another wondering soul..
Dan,
‘As we're all waiting for our time to go adventuring in this world.’
Ah…such prophetic words are making me wonder and think of this new unforeseen adventure of mine which has begun. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
Unforseen sound like an incredibly wonderful adventure and one in sure a delightful soul as you deserves.
Always appreciate your time my friend
Doing my best to give you as much time as I can because I do enjoy reading your poems and the videos you post.☺️
Great adventure, enjoying nature. Lovely lines indeed.
Thank you my friend, just doing what we do to stay positive.
Always appreciated
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