Alloy

spilleronsheet

The cognised emotions 

dwelling upon 

upon a delirious moment

an infatuation of kind 

hitting the sparks on line 

 

 

the obscure environment 

that made 

the pure sane  born 

to the unsettling environment that bore 

an alloy replaced 

 

 

 

like stainless steel 

durable and strong 

hard and flexible 

connecting and bridging upon 

upon its rail 

the journey of life carries 

the heart made of steel 

not pestering to unceasing obstacles 

 

 

 

like a medal  of bronze 

awarded and accorded; the third 

though it wasn’t her mistake 

neither gold 

nor silver 

how tragic the soul gave all 

Yet beautiful 

it wasn’t last at all 

wish if it could be

either  a bronze ?

 

 

 

like brass 

ringing the bells 

Shrilling and shouting it’s mind 

in a sonorous tune 

kinder to ears 

for nobody to sneer 

it continued to make sounds 

even if, no one was around 

 

An amalgam of emotions 

an alloy of reactions 

like a student before exam 

anxious and nervous 

like a lover in romance 

excited and anticipating 

like a professional in interview 

scared and stressed

like an athlete in a marathon 

stiff and flexible 

 

 

born as pure 

So were we once crude 

when did it turn alloy ?

maybe fate makes us alloy 

maybe situation trains to be alloy 

it’s better to be alloy 

to get updated and advanced as alloy….

 

Higher power as alchemist 

refining our soul 

greatest creation defined  

nothing but 

just a 

piece of alloy…

 

  • Author: spilleronsheet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2022 15:12
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 49
  • User favorite of this poem: Rocky Lagou.
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments3

  • Rozina

    Yes really clever and excellent analogies.

    • spilleronsheet

      Thank you so much dear Rozina

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Dear Spiller,
      An alloy is stronger than its its original form...
      These lines were excellent...
      "An amalgam of emotions
      an alloy of reactions
      like a student before exam
      anxious and nervous
      like a lover in romance
      excited and anticipating
      like a professional in interview
      scared and stressed
      like an athlete in a marathon
      stiff and flexible "

      Time you prove your mettle !! 🙂 dear Alloy !!

      • spilleronsheet

        Thank you so much dear Vamsi
        I am an alloy in making
        But surely I will chime
        Shine better than pure
        And will service for the well being of others

      • Rocky Lagou

        I love the way in which you combined emotional language with metallurgic lexicon to produce a poem so rich and living. The play on the double meaning of "pure" was utilized so skillfully and the end result is a glory. Bravo! 👏😊

        • spilleronsheet

          It takes a ton to weave a story
          But it takes brilliance to understand one
          One maybe a diamond to shine
          But worthless if not noticed
          Thank you so much for your kind comments
          And it feels good to be understood



        To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.