The cognised emotions
dwelling upon
upon a delirious moment
an infatuation of kind
hitting the sparks on line
the obscure environment
that made
the pure sane born
to the unsettling environment that bore
an alloy replaced
like stainless steel
durable and strong
hard and flexible
connecting and bridging upon
upon its rail
the journey of life carries
the heart made of steel
not pestering to unceasing obstacles
like a medal of bronze
awarded and accorded; the third
though it wasn’t her mistake
neither gold
nor silver
how tragic the soul gave all
Yet beautiful
it wasn’t last at all
wish if it could be
either a bronze ?
like brass
ringing the bells
Shrilling and shouting it’s mind
in a sonorous tune
kinder to ears
for nobody to sneer
it continued to make sounds
even if, no one was around
An amalgam of emotions
an alloy of reactions
like a student before exam
anxious and nervous
like a lover in romance
excited and anticipating
like a professional in interview
scared and stressed
like an athlete in a marathon
stiff and flexible
born as pure
So were we once crude
when did it turn alloy ?
maybe fate makes us alloy
maybe situation trains to be alloy
it’s better to be alloy
to get updated and advanced as alloy….
Higher power as alchemist
refining our soul
greatest creation defined
nothing but
just a
piece of alloy…
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Yes really clever and excellent analogies.
Thank you so much dear Rozina
Dear Spiller,
An alloy is stronger than its its original form...
These lines were excellent...
"An amalgam of emotions
an alloy of reactions
like a student before exam
anxious and nervous
like a lover in romance
excited and anticipating
like a professional in interview
scared and stressed
like an athlete in a marathon
stiff and flexible "
Time you prove your mettle !! 🙂 dear Alloy !!
Thank you so much dear Vamsi
I am an alloy in making
But surely I will chime
Shine better than pure
And will service for the well being of others
I love the way in which you combined emotional language with metallurgic lexicon to produce a poem so rich and living. The play on the double meaning of "pure" was utilized so skillfully and the end result is a glory. Bravo! 👏😊
It takes a ton to weave a story
But it takes brilliance to understand one
One maybe a diamond to shine
But worthless if not noticed
Thank you so much for your kind comments
And it feels good to be understood
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