Our island

Crowns4Christ

Our island is in the midst the vast blue sea,

It is  a place you built for you and me,

It is ours, and ours alone,

Doesn't have internet nor a phone,

It's a place we can go with no interruptions,

And we can take a break from this worlds corruptions.

We can make love under the stars,

No people in sight,all else is afar,

So my love,take us to this place that you built for me,

At least for a few days,we will be worryfree

  • Author: Crowns4Christ (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2022 16:21
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: ForeverJesus7.
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Comments7

  • GiftedT17

    Love this❤

  • Crowns4Christ

    Thank you Gifted

  • ForeverJesus7

    I love this piece. I especially like the third and forth lines. Keep writing.
    Persistence is key

  • Crowns4Christ

    Thanks my love, that would be nice wouldn't it,you and I with no interruptions or distraction

  • Goldfinch60

    I too have an island like that and all are welcome.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write Blue.
    I saw some pics of internet connections. Invisible to the human eye. If they were visible and tangible as wires, lines, etc, we would not be able to move. We would be all tangled up in them.

  • Rocky Lagou

    We all need a little paradise where we can escape reality. Beautiful job! 👍



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