Solid, massive, hair of white
Stoically stands in dying light
Frigid ice drifts and cracks
He knows there is no going back
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Author:
Michael William Reid (
Offline) - Published: February 16th, 2022 02:52
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Such a sad state of affairs Michael.
Andy
It really is, and there really is no going back
Wow the way this was short but full of meaning is so beautiful! Kudos! 👏
I find the complex simplicity of the short poem very powerful. It's not really my usual style but I was trying to expand my horizons a little and I'm so glad you enjoyed it
In four lines you have brought out a story. Kudoos to you
Thank you so much I really tried to pour a whole story into those 4 lines and I'm very glad that you enjoyed it
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