Making It Perfect.

Goldfinch60



And the wind blows

But I go on,

Walking into it.

The harder it blows

The more determined I become,

Nothing will push me back

I will always go forward in my life,

No obstacles will stop me.

And the harder it blows

The stronger I get

As I move ahead

Into this wonderful life that I have.

A life filled with beauty,

The beauty of Nature,

Filled with love,

Love for all.

I know the wind will stop blowing

And my life will be filled with calm,

Filled with calm and my love,

Making it perfect.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 18th, 2022 02:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: Life is good.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 55
  • Users favorite of this poem: spilleronsheet, Vamsi Sudha
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  • Rozina

    A beautiful message of staying strong, staying positive and not to give up hope. Thank you.

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind Rozina, I am always posiive.

      Andy

    • Theo8176

      Amazing Poem! You beautifully capture the undying hope of one day hardship will come to an end. Such an amazing reflection on life.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Theo, hardship in my life is just not there, I have been been very fortunate in my life and I know that every day is a good day.

        Andy

      • spilleronsheet

        An amazing poetry
        Blissful and calm
        Spreading positivity and warmth
        And the encouragement and desire to win your day
        Thanks dear Andy for sharing the sameā€¦.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you spilleronsheet, I am always positive.

          Andy

        • orchidee

          I suppose sometimes we need to, or have to, go the way the wind is blowing, walking into it.
          Now it's started me off singing: 'The answer my friend is blowin' in the wind...'
          Woof! It's OK, Fido. I don't mean baked beans or sprouts! lol.

          • Goldfinch60

            We mus always go forward Orchi, that is where our life is going to be.

            Andy

            • orchidee

              I saw a guy walking backwards with two bags of shopping! True. Maybe he was training for the Annual Backwards Walking Marathon. Or testing out the eyes in the back of his head. lol.

            • Vamsi Sudha

              Dear Gold !!
              Facing the adverse winds, is the thrill of life...So lets face it boldly...!!
              Good one !!

              • Goldfinch60

                So true VS, we must always face the adverse in ur lives and move forward.

                Andy

              • L. B. Mek

                only those currently aquaplaning through life, on winds
                of Eunice and Dudley, in our beloved Blighty
                will truly appreciate
                the timing and poetic brevity of your words, my friend
                a great write!
                have a great weekend, Andy
                (not one for paragliding, me thinks)
                lol

                • Goldfinch60

                  So true Mek,

                  No paragliding is out this weekend as it has been for every weekend of my life.

                  Andy

                  • L. B. Mek

                    lmao! that deadpan response caught me off-guard
                    yeah, a no paragliding policy
                    tends to work well for those who enjoy, longer lives...

                  • Garth Rakumakoe

                    Outlook makes all the difference! - Pitch-perfect!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      It surely does Garth, thank you.

                      Andy

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Revenge comes sweet so never curse
                      and should the raging winds get worse
                      Eat baked beans and walk in reverse.

                      Nice one Andy (sorry I can rarely resist)

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Good one Michael, thank you,

                        Andy



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