A moment of indecisiveness
a moment of pause
a long haul
Negligence and so aloof
never to speak
Deep inside were words of displease
obedience of years
tagged as sheep
middle of somewhere
in sudden breeze
the rebel broke out
frustrated lion roared across streets
docile was it ?
a mere act of sheep
no longer the hauling cries
but howl of victory
amidst the quest
in the jungle of conquests
to conquer the heart and rest….
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Dear Spiller, So many interpretations strike at once. But
Let not the SHEEP not Sleep,
The journey is surely Steep
Not the time to Weep
Face the Lion with a LEAP !!
Good one !! But Poignant one ofcourse !!
A poetic reply
To the curiosities stored
A beautiful advice
For the anxieties it holds
A cheerful smile
To awaken the spirits
And a nudge of support
Telling, Oh dear friend
Get up and run again
Thanks dear Vamsi for always giving wonderful replies
Sometimes we have to follow the heart .. not just follow everyone ejse whilst making ourselves unhappy
Great writing again , spiller ))
Strikingly true dear Rose
Follow the tunes heart sets
On which mind rests
Let the society be whatever it wants
One can’t be whatever they want
Thanks for always resonating with my thoughts
Clever words spilleronsheet, so much meaning for which to contemplate.
Andy
Thank you so much dear Andy
Trying to borrow your lens of life
'Negligence and so aloof
never to speak
Deep inside were words of displease
obedience of years
tagged as sheep
middle of somewhere
in sudden breeze
the rebel broke out
frustrated lion
roared across streets
docile was it ?'
loved these stanzas
wonderfully worded, showcasing
that less is more
succinctly inked, wonder of poetry..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
Thank you so much dear Mek
Springs around the corner
Like the flowers in bloom
I hope my poetry can cultivate and spread more fragrance across the room….
Yes! What and ending and once truly connected to that inner raw, the heart no longer feels the need for more.
Whatever will be will be..
Fantastic stuff, write on!
Thanks a lot dear poetic Dan
It feels good to be able to connect….
there is more to this page than first meets the eye .. once the brain is engaged and an imagination is added, it is possible to interpret this fine work in many ways that go far beyond the obvious ......... super spiller ................ Neville
Thank you so much dear Neville
It feels good to be appreciated
A smile originates like a big curve from ear to ear
Looks like, I could finally paint a beautiful scene….
Great lines. Yes always easier to follow the crowd. It needs guts to stand up and speak out one’s own beliefs.
So true dear Rozina
Glad you liked it
I find this poem beautifully parallel to my ethical standpoints. I strive to promote the notion that "you have to live for YOURSELF" in my poetry and my works. Although it may seem egocentric, at the end of the day, it is "survival of the fittest." If you decide to follow leaders and join the bandwagon, you will never stand out or make YOUR voice heard. So I love the way you expressed that message through this poem! Bravo! 💖💖
Yes indeed, it’s best to realise that anyone else comes behind. Behind to existence of thyself….cause you can heed to others only when you live for yourself…self love is priority…I am glad that you liked my poetry
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