a moment of self introspection
the sudden volcanic eruptions
sooner to realise
what was lying inside
the magma of anguish
the lava of grief
what was beneath ?
never too late,
comprehend
the passion driving inside…
euphoric moment,
when sudden passion arise
that was the soul
hidden inside
or ignorant to times
the bookworm
who loved to read
read novels
and read mind
never too late, to realise
the hidden us
adapted to outside …….
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Another great writing spiller ..🙂 there is so much more to us , than our difficult emotions .. as you express in your poem . It’s what’s underneath that matters and our true self
Indeed dear Rose
An adventure to looking inside is very fun to understand…
Nice lines
the magma of anguish
the lava of grief
what was beneath ?
beautiful analogy , magma is hidden and lava flows out...wow !!
Let the eruptions give us wonderful poems :)) LAVA is a surely a fertile one !!
Thank you so much dear Vamsi…I am glad you liked the volcano that erupted, and the subsequent lava that flowed…
Good write Spill.
Thanks Orchi
an introvert
is only, one action
or sentence, away
from evolving
into an extrovert...
and a bookworm
is simply short of self-belief
from utilising
that same creativity
they've been cultivating
in all those imagined scenes
they brought to life, in their mind's - eye...
(such is the gap
between our hopeful wishes
and those dreams
we realised, in-to our reality....)
A very thought provoking and deep insight
That tells me the evolution of a soul inside
Thank you so much dear Mek
Indeed that’s just the gap one need to cross
The gap between dream and reality
I am a great believer in the concept of the unity of opposites or kenzen inchinyo .. these fine words made me think along such lines ........ N
Ken zen Ichi Nyo : oneness of body and mind
So beautiful
Thanks for such a thoughtful reply
Wow! What a potent thought delivered with excellence. "The hidden us adapted to outside." I mean you really said it all with those lines. We are an ever-adapting being and we tend to lose our true self within these metamorphoses. 👏🦋🌠
Often the truest past fades
When we try best being what others want
In comforting others, we forget what’s e were
Why we were ?
So I hope sooner we can realise that child who lives inside
Cause that soul keeps yelling for help
Thanks dear Rocky for stopping by
They say the beauty of lava,is that even as it destroys,it also creates. Just as love conquers hate. Creation conquers destruction. I guess what I got from this,is that we have to look within ourselves to create the best creation of ourselves.🤗🍻🌞🕊
That’s a beautiful interpretation
Finding warmth even in cold days
A bout of positivity that’s just what one needs
Yes cold days indeed. But I believe warmer days are awaiting around the next corner.🕊
Yes the hidden inner has much to teach dear spills - your lead up to finding its secrets is fascinatingly creative my friend.
Thank you so much dear Fay
Trying to find every bit of mine
Or more appropriately rediscovering the one identified
Sometimes because of circumstances we have to keep much within ourselves. And then it erupts! A wonderful poem.
Indeed
To the docile self
You never know whose suppressing the volcanoes, don’t know how long
Thanks dear Rozina
So much wonder is hidden inside us spilleronsheet that it sometimes surprises us how wonderful life is.
Andy
The jewel may shine
But it’s noticed only when the designer sets upon his eyes
I totally agree humans are bundle of surprise
It's amazing that we yearn to explore the world, the space around us and yet often don't realize that there is an inner space often waiting to be explored. Bravo for such an awakening. Thank you !
Yep
You truly understood the feel
So well deciphered
Thanks reader for stopping by
It gives a lot of encouragement to pen more emotions
To dig deeper in philosophies of life….
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