A Sonnet Attempt

Rozina

 

            The English Rose

The English Rose is known to all

Her loveliness and gentle grace

She sits in splendour to enthrall

Her skin so soft her scent a trace

 

In gardens here and far beyond

The English Rose looks like a queen

The rose, the land, they have a bond

She grows so fair and so serene

 

The lad in love he drifts on by

He looks with longing at the Rose

He holds his own and gives a sigh

This beauty with her many beaus

 

Ah Rose dear Rose you're so divine

I dream and wish that you are mine.

 

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I googled sonnets after reading the beautiful poems by Robert and Teddy. I am trying to write different types of poems by reading those by MPS poets.

 

  • Author: Rozina (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 23rd, 2022 01:58
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Paul Bell.
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Comments8

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Really like this .. I like your mention of the rose being like a queen and the bond of the rose the land .. very nice !

    • Rozina

      Thank you so much.

    • Goldfinch60

      Sonnet attempt passed with flying colours Rozina.

      Andy

      • Rozina

        Thank you. This is good news!

      • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

        I very much enjoyed this Rozina! I too like how the Rose looks like a queen.πŸŒΉπŸ•ŠπŸŒž

        • Rozina

          Thank you.

        • Neville


          although I have never been tempted to try & craft one myself, I have a reasonable understanding of their composition & can appreciate not only their crafting and beauty .. but appreciate a good one when I see/read one .. and this Roz is a very fine example .. it gets my vote ............ Neville

          • Rozina

            Thank you Neville. I am attempting various styles gradually as I read and learn about them at this site.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Loud applause for this rose-scented sonnet attempt - top marks Rozina..

            • Rozina

              Thank you Fay.

            • Rocky Lagou

              This was a lovely poem Rozina. I find writing in fixed forms a little oppressing πŸ˜… so that's why I stick with free verse for most of my writing but this was a marvel. Kudos to you! πŸ’–

              • Rozina

                Thank you. Opposite for me. I have tried free verse but it looks unreal and I’m too embarrassed to put it up! Will keep on trying. It’s interesting though how the brain connections work!

              • Paul Bell

                You are officially a Sonneter now.
                My love is like a red, red rose.
                She drank the wine, and is now comatose.

                • Rozina

                  Hahaha thank you.
                  Your stories are still the best Paul
                  But they always seem so very tall!

                  • Paul Bell

                    I am 6ft 12. lol

                  • A.D. Small

                    Wow this is very well written and i believe this has inspired me to write a sonnet as well.... Great job. Please check out work as well.

                    • Rozina

                      Thank you very much. Sure.

                      • A.D. Small

                        You are welcome. Have a great day!



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