My special fix

Richmondpomes

Have you ever felt like the whole world is watching you and you still can’t do anything right?                                                                                                                    As you walk you fall. When you stand you sit nothings right you don't know why or how to fix it. You feel like a leaf falling down into the grand canyon getting caught with every gust of wind constantly in a downward spiral never knowing when you're going to plummet into the ground hitting harder and harder coming down from every high no matter how hard you try you can never stay up and the low’s feel so low that you feel like you can’t move or talk sometimes you can’t breathe you get so choked up you think for a moment today might be the DAY that i finally DIE the day I finally get to feel that feeling I've been craving for so time like a meth head or a heroin-addicted without there special fix but you think to yourself this special fix is quick and simple not a drug no not at all just complete numbness that's it.

  • Author: Autumn (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 25th, 2022 11:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: THis is one of my first I'm just in high school so let me know if it's any good
  • Category: Sad
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  • Rocky Lagou

    Hey! I'm also a fellow high schooler poet! I just want to say this was conveyed very well. I enjoyed your images and the metaphor with addicts. Life is chaotic but we just have to learn to navigate through the rough waters. Great poem! Continue making art about what moves you! 💖

    • Richmondpomes

      Thank you! I find it's very hard as a writer to find places where work really fits but I'm glad a have a pace to finally do that, Yes! life has rough waters and pomes help me with that I'm glad I'm still in the boat going through it tho

    • Paul Bell

      In a way you're right, life is a competition and everyone is watching you. So in a way, we're all in the same boat. Some say the greatest high is failure, cos you get to do it again till you get it right. It's all about trying new things and having fun along the way.



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