One Of Two.


There I was in the Jazz Club

Listening to the band,

They were alright

But nothing hooked me,

Hooked me into the wonder of Jazz.

But all was fine

As there sitting next to me was my lover,

Knees pressing hard with each other.

I was quite happy,

As I had one of the two,

One of the two loves of my life.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2022 02:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: I went to the Jazz Club with my loved one as usual but the Jazz Band were ok but did not pull me into their jazz as many Jazz Bands do. Andy
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 41


  • Neville

    Jazz n footsie under the table always works for me Andy ........... Neville 🙂

    • Goldfinch60

      It surely does Neville.


    • Michael Edwards

      Sounds like a great evening despite....
      Cry me a river - only one version for me - has to be Julie London - the sexiest voive ever.

      • Goldfinch60

        It was.
        Yes the Julie London version is the best version.


      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.
        Can't they get the staff (or jazz groups) these days? Well, usually yes, as you say.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Orchi.
          The group was OK but there music did not pull me into it as many Jazz Groups do.


        • Dove

          Company always makes for a delightful evening.. Music is for entertainment! 😀

          • Goldfinch60

            It surely does Dove.


          • Doggerel Dave

            Wot, one of two knees? Don't worry Andy - the other one will be there for You given the fullness of time....or rather the has to be - it is attached, I presume? 😊

            • Goldfinch60

              One of two situations, one the jazz two the company. A good evening was had.


            • Rozina

              Maybe any jazz band would have sounded like music to your ears when you’re with your loved one? Such a pleasure to read your happiness poems.

              • Goldfinch60

                So kind Rozina, thank you.


              • dusk arising

                To say i'm envious is...... true dammit LOL.
                Now then, be honest, does your lady share your tastes in music?

                • Goldfinch60

                  Sorry about that d a but this just seem to happen and is a surprise for us both.
                  She certainly seems to, music has certainly been part of her life as well, she was Chair of a Welsh Male Voice Choir that performed all over the country.


                • spilleronsheet

                  Good one dear Andy
                  Have a wonderful time ahead…

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you spilleronsheet, I am sure that we are in for wonderful times.


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