Reef

Neville

Reef

 

I want to be there

where the thin white line

gets broken ..

Somewhere between

the sky,

the horizon and the sea

Precisely where

The waves get thrown

 Against the coral ..

And where we once tied

the knot ..

Oh' so very long ago now ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2022 03:43
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  • orchidee

    Good write N. An atmospheric picture.
    Aww, why they say 'I don't want to be there', when I say 'I'm gonna sing at [insert name of place]'! lol.

    • Neville



      thank you Orchidee ........... I must say, I can't say that's not a relief ......................................... 🙂

    • Dove

      Sounds like a beautiful moment and place!
      Mine was at The Silver Bell Wedding Chapel in Las Vegas, and I held plastic flowers, no guest... and I wore an orange dress and brown boots..

      • Neville



        ................................... splendid, my favourite combination ......................... yes it was and thank you Dove ..

      • Rozina

        What a beautiful memory of your wedding. Lovely lines.

        • Neville



          Ha .. bless you Roz .. I actually got married in an old psychiatric hospital chapel in Northampton .. presided over by my late Father-in-Law who was the vicar & hospital chaplain ... This little scribble was inspired by the place where I renewed my vows .. again, quite some time ago but I went back there very recently ....................................................... Many serious thanks dear friend .. Neville

        • Doggerel Dave

          Now that's autobiography rich in detail, Neville - I'd like to read more of it.
          As a side issue - it may also be a memorial to a reef which no longer exists - if the processes in progress Down Under are anything to go by.

          • Neville



            Cheers DD .. and if you bark nicely sir .. I might just send you a copy of the first chapter .. 🙂

            • Doggerel Dave


              Fulsome but tonally well modulated, ‘Wuff’.

            • Paul Bell

              Definitely the place to get married, and keeps you in the mood for the rest of the holiday.

              • Neville



                I'm always in the mood for a holiday Paul .. but I get your drift sir and thank you for it .............. N

              • Christina8

                Beautiful write in remembrance of your wedding/vow renewal. i read some of the comments and it's beautiful down there isn't it? Wonderful!

                • Neville



                  Beautiful review if ya ask me ......................... and yes, it is down there ............................ N 🙂

                • Michael Edwards

                  Paints a picture - wish I were there now .......🌞🌞

                  • Neville

                    I have been thinking seriously about commissioning you sir Michael ......... but am gonna wait until I have checked out your todays special offering as promoted by the Guv\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'nor DA in the meantime, bless ya sir ...... N 🙂

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Always happy to oblige - got a bit obsessive with limericks at the moment so must start thinking about other forms. Cheers on yer N

                    • dusk arising

                      Those magical places of yesterday which our dreams romance to re-visit far from the everyday of reality to the land of bliss.

                      Your poetry is always first class and ethereal which grasps my imagination every time. Here i am drawn in once again to experience the emotion and give some sort of rendering of where my mind is taken. I wish that more on MPS shared your skills.

                      • Neville



                        Hey Guv'nor Dusky .. You may never know just how bloomin much I really value your visits, encouragement & support .............. but believe me, I truly do .......................... no puns, maybe's or kiddin ................................ Neville 🙂

                      • spilleronsheet

                        The Great Barrier Reef brushed my mind
                        A scenic beauty emerged inside
                        A beautiful poetry that called calm inside
                        Thanks dear Neville

                        • Neville



                          The reef in question is the second biggest barrier reef on this particular planet spiller .. but I am delighted that my scribble conjoured up the idea of the biggest one which you mention .. thank you so much for the great review, and for being my friend ......................................... Neville

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Beautiful place to tie the knot Neville and that place will be forever in your heart.

                          Andy

                          • Neville



                            We call it a reef knot around these here parts .................. ta Andy .......................... 🙂



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