Dove

Love it's Sweet Warmth- Rondelet

Love it's sweet warmth
What pleasure I found in a kiss
Love it's sweet warmth
What my soft lips sorely did miss
Was the warm tinge of your sweet lips
Love it's sweet warmth

Comments5

  • Neville


    I can not for the life of me imagine your lips being lonely .. Such a sweet little Rondelet Dove me luv .. forgive me, but I imagine yours taste of sweet cherries or lychee's maybe .. x

    • Dove

      Today orange marmalade, lips of mine
      Sweet tangy and sublime …
      Thanks for a lovely critique

    • Teddy.15

      Very nicely done 💖

      • Dove

        Thank you kindly

      • Michael Edwards

        Beautiful piece - a great form and must write some more when I get time - you've inspired me.

        • Dove

          Thank Micheal… glad I inspired.. I should say your short pieces inspire us to smile

        • dusk arising

          The kiss between two who are in love is the true kiss of life. A thought which came to me having read your lovely piece today.

          • Dove

            Thanks DA, love that little quote “ A true kiss of Life” Makes an excellent Title for a poem or Story

          • Goldfinch60

            So very true Dove, love's pleasure is so wonderful.

            Andy

            • Dove

              Thank you kindly Andy, smiles!



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